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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.12

Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. v. 12
With the curious nature of human beings, history enthusiasts believe that the quest to decode the origin and past of human ancestors is very important as it would help us to understand human's life. However, some people do not support this idea. This essay will discuss both perspectives along with my take on it. History has proven to be a great teacher for human beings in every aspect. Especially with the invention of modern technologies, archaeologists and scientists are able to unwind the human's history even with more accuracy than ever. Although these experiments are very expensive, the historians believe that these discoveries will provide valuable insights on how to approach life for the greater good. For instance, wars have taught people that they only cause loss for human life. Similarly, we will be able to lead a better future learning from our past. On the contrary, some people argue that the lifestyle of humans at present is very different from the past. Therefore, the lessons from our past would not be of any help now. In fact, many ideas of our ancestors would be irrelevant in the current situation. One such example is the change in family roles, which is not relevant anymore. Women in our society are well educated unlike the women from the past. In conclusion, it is very true that the life of our ancestors is very different from ours with a huge gap in ideologies. However, I believe that life is a journey where humans learn from their mistakes and progress. It is a smart move to learn from our ancestors and avoid those mistakes.
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beings, history enthusiasts believe that the quest to decode the origin and past of
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us to understand human's
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.
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do not support this
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. This essay will discuss both perspectives along with my take on it.

History has proven to be a great teacher for
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human
beings in every aspect.
Especially
with the invention of modern technologies, archaeologists and scientists are able to unwind the human's history even with more accuracy than ever. Although these experiments are
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very
expensive, the historians believe that these discoveries will provide valuable insights on how to approach
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life
for the greater
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good
.
For instance
, wars have taught
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people
that they
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only
cause loss for
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human
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life
.
Similarly
, we will be able to lead a better future learning from our past.

On the contrary
,
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some
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argue that the lifestyle of
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at present is
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from the past.
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. In fact,
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ideas
of our
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would be irrelevant in the
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current
situation. One such example is the
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change
in family roles, which is not relevant anymore. Women in our society are
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well educated
unlike the women from the past.

In conclusion
, it is
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true that the
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life
of our
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ancestors
is
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very
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different
from ours with a huge gap in ideologies.
However
, I believe that
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life
is a journey where
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humans
learn from their mistakes and progress. It is a smart
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move
to learn from our
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ancestors
and avoid those mistakes.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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