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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.18

Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. v. 18
LESSONS WE CAN LEARN FROM HISTORY HAS ALWAYS BEEN A TOPIC OF DEPATE AS PEOPLE HAS ALWAYS HAD DIFFERENT VIEWS REGARDING HOW MUCH WE CAN LEARN FROM THE PAST. SOME THINK THAT HISTORY GIVES US FREE LESSONS WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT LOOKING INTO THE POST TO LEARN FOR OUR CURRENT EVENTS IS JUST A WASTE OF TIME. IN THIS ESSAY I WILL DISCUSS BOTH SIDES OF VIEW AND I WILL EXPLAIN WHY I THINK THAT HISTORY IS THE BEST TEACHER. IT IS SOME PEOPLE’S BELIEF THAT REVIEWING THE PREVIOUS EVENTS IS NOT BENEFICIAL BECAUSE THEY ARE CONVINCED THAT THE PRESENT IS TOTALLY DIFFERENT THAN THE PAST AND THAT OUR LIFE TODAY IS NOT SIMILAR TO OUR ANCESTOR’S LIFE. THEY THINK THAT WHAT HAPPENED IN THE PAST CAN NOT BE REPEATED IN THE FUTURE AND THAT IS WHY HISTORY CAN NEVER BE A MIRROR TO THE FUTURE. ON THE OTHER HAND OTHERS CHARISH HISTORY AS A VALUABLE SOURCE OF WISDOM AND EXPERIENCE BECAUSE THEY THINK THAT HISTORY REPEATS ITSELF AND THAT IF WE LOOK AT ANY PROBLEMS WE FACE TODAY WE WILL SURELY FIND SIMILAR PROBLEMS IN THE PAST FROM WHICH WE CAN GAIN EXPERIENCE AND FIND SOME INVALUABLE SOLUTIONS. I AGREE WITH LATEST VIEW AS I THINK THAT BOTH PEOPLE AND NATIONS CAN LEARN A LOT IF THEY STUDY THE HISTORY. FOR EXAMPLE, WHEN WE LOOK AT WARS WE FIND THAT THEY WERE ALWAYS PRECEDED BY SIMILAR CONFLICTS AND THAT THEY BROKE OUT IN SIMILAR CONDITIONS AND THAT WE CAN AVOID THE HORRORS OF WARS IF WE STUDY THOSE CIRCUMSTANCES AND ABOLISH THEM. IN CONCLUSION, AS PEOPLE SPLIT INTO TWO CAMPS WHEN THEY LOOK AT THE HISTORY, I TEND TO SUPPORT THE SIDE OF VIEW THAT LOOK AT HISTORY AS THE KEY TO UNDERSTAND NOT ONLY OUR PRESENCE BUT ALSO OUR FUTURE AS I BELIEVE THAT WHOEVER HAS NO PAST HAS NO FUTURE.
LESSONS WE CAN
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LEARN
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HISTORY
HAS ALWAYS BEEN A TOPIC OF
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DEPATE
AS
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PEOPLE
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HAS
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DIFFERENT
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VIEWS
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LEARN
FROM THE
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PAST
.
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SOME
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THINK
THAT
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HISTORY
GIVES US FREE LESSONS WHILE OTHERS
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THINK
THAT LOOKING INTO THE POST TO
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LEARN
FOR OUR
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CURRENT
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EVENTS
IS
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JUST
A WASTE OF TIME. IN THIS ESSAY I WILL DISCUSS BOTH SIDES OF
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VIEW
AND I WILL
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EXPLAIN
WHY I
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THINK
THAT
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HISTORY
IS THE BEST TEACHER.

IT IS
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SOME
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PEOPLE’S
BELIEF THAT REVIEWING THE PREVIOUS
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EVENTS
IS NOT BENEFICIAL
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BECAUSE
THEY
ARE CONVINCED
THAT THE PRESENT IS
TOTALLY
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DIFFERENT
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THAN
THE
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PAST
AND THAT OUR LIFE
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TODAY
IS NOT
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SIMILAR
TO OUR ANCESTOR’S LIFE. THEY
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THINK
THAT WHAT HAPPENED IN THE
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PAST
CAN NOT
BE REPEATED
IN THE FUTURE AND
THAT IS
WHY
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HISTORY
CAN NEVER BE A MIRROR TO THE FUTURE.

ON THE OTHER HAND
OTHERS
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CHARISH
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HISTORY
AS A VALUABLE SOURCE OF WISDOM AND EXPERIENCE
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BECAUSE
THEY
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THINK
THAT
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HISTORY
REPEATS ITSELF AND THAT IF WE
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LOOK
AT ANY PROBLEMS WE FACE
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TODAY
WE WILL
SURELY
FIND
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SIMILAR
PROBLEMS IN THE
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PAST
FROM WHICH WE CAN GAIN EXPERIENCE AND FIND
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SOME
INVALUABLE SOLUTIONS.

I
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AGREE
WITH
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LATEST
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VIEW
AS I
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THINK
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PEOPLE
AND NATIONS CAN
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LEARN
A LOT IF THEY STUDY THE
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HISTORY
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, WHEN WE
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LOOK
AT WARS WE FIND THAT THEY WERE ALWAYS PRECEDED BY
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SIMILAR
CONFLICTS AND THAT THEY BROKE OUT IN
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SIMILAR
CONDITIONS AND THAT WE CAN AVOID THE HORRORS OF WARS IF WE STUDY THOSE CIRCUMSTANCES AND ABOLISH THEM.

IN CONCLUSION
, AS
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PEOPLE
SPLIT INTO TWO CAMPS WHEN THEY
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LOOK
AT THE
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HISTORY
, I TEND TO SUPPORT THE SIDE OF
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VIEW
THAT
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LOOK
AT
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HISTORY
AS THE KEY TO UNDERSTAND NOT
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ONLY
OUR PRESENCE
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BUT
ALSO
OUR FUTURE AS I BELIEVE THAT WHOEVER HAS NO
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PAST
HAS NO FUTURE.
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40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. v. 18

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
313 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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