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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

It is usually believed that a person cannot learn from his or her past life, but it is also believed that history plays an important role in explaining a human's life. According to my opinion historical data of a person should be given the due importance while it is not always necessary to be dependent on it. Historical data is not always capable of predicting a humans life to the full extent but it holds a significant amount of importance. For instance a person who has never operated an Industrial Machine, may operate it wrong the first time but after leaning from his past experiences, he would gradually increase his skills and move towards perfection. On the contradictory if a person learns to do a particular tast and achives a good amount of proficiency in performing that particular task, but when said to perform another task, the past experience would not help him alltough he has achived a significant amount of skill in performing task one. But there are some common tasks which when mastered with the help of trial and errors would surely help in tackling the upcoming challanges in the near and far future, like Cycling, this process can be only mastered by learnig from the past experiences, largely from the failures. Concluding the argument it could be said that history is not the only source which could help in the improvement of a persons life but also history of a person should be respected because it contributes a significant amount in development of a persons lifestyle.
It is
usually
believed that a
person
cannot learn from
his or her
past
life,
but
it is
also
believed that history plays an
important
role in explaining a human's life.

According to my opinion historical data of a
person
should be
given
the due importance while it is not always necessary to be dependent on it.

Historical data is not always capable of predicting
a humans
life to the full extent
but
it holds a significant
amount
of importance.
For instance
a
person
who has never operated an Industrial Machine, may operate it
wrong
the
first
time
but
after leaning from his
past experiences
, he would
gradually
increase his
skills
and
move
towards perfection. On the contradictory if a
person
learns to do a particular
tast
and
achives
a
good
amount
of proficiency in performing that particular
task
,
but
when said to perform another
task
, the
past experience
would not
help
him
alltough
he has
achived
a significant
amount
of
skill
in performing
task
one.

But
there are
some
common
tasks
which when mastered with the
help
of trial and errors would
surely
help
in tackling the upcoming
challanges
in the near and far future, like Cycling, this process can be
only
mastered by
learnig
from the
past experiences
,
largely
from the failures.

Concluding the argument it could
be said
that history is not the
only
source which could
help
in the improvement of a
persons
life
but
also
history of a
person
should
be respected
because
it contributes a significant
amount
in development of a
persons
lifestyle.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

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