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some people believe that war is bad

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It is considered by some that war is very dangerous, and in this essay, an endeavor has been made to depict my opinion with respect to the pros and cons of this issue. On the one hand, nothing can alter the fact that we live in the age of technology and the majority of folk have inclinations to avoid war. On the other hand, despite the fact that there are a variety of different perspectives on the question of whether it seems reasonable to assume that war is very expensive for any country and impossible to avoid. This is reflective of the point that the repercussions of something are not reasonable. Moreover, statistics have demonstrated that most people emphasize the importance of something.
It
is considered
by
some
that war is
very
dangerous
, and in this essay, an endeavor has
been made
to depict my opinion with respect to the pros and cons of this issue.

On the one hand, nothing can alter the fact that we
live
in the age of technology and the majority of folk have inclinations to avoid war.

On the other hand
, despite the fact that there are a variety of
different
perspectives on
the question of whether
it seems reasonable to assume that war is
very
expensive for any country and impossible to avoid.

This is reflective of the point that the repercussions of something are not reasonable.
Moreover
, statistics have demonstrated that most
people
emphasize the importance of something.
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IELTS essay some people believe that war is bad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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