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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. knjW

In recent years, the tourism industry is escalatinga long time in a distant country. At the same time, local inhabitants love them. To be specific, I have been to Thailand since 2017 that there was a strict law for the costume when I visited pagodas and temple in there. Men must wear long pants and shirts with sleeves. Women must wear long skirts or long pants to cover up their knees. If tourists do not caution this custom, they will get rid of the pagodas along with temples. On the other hand, some others worried about new cultural differences that it led to the risk of their traditional cultures. For example, in Ukraine, tourist must not give flowers with round number which those related to funerals. Furthermore, not only the risk of their traditional cultures but also affect of their health. To illustrate, in Islam countries, governments prohibit visitors drink wine because it effects their brain. In brief, from my perspective, tourists would always like to learn and visit local customs when they came to new places. Moreover, travelers also want to share their custom As a result, tourist destinations should be opened to the cultural diversity of its newcomers.

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In brief
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tourists
 would always like to learn and visit local customs when they came to new places. Moreover
, travelers also
 want to share their custom As a result
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourist
 destinations should be opened
 to the cultural diversity of its newcomers. 