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Violence in the media promotoes violence in society. Agree or disagree?

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IELTS essay Violence in the media promotoes violence in society. Agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
65 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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