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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? 8Kd5

The issue of the violence on television and computer games. Violence can not be something positive, Thus when people's play computer games or watch on television there is an impact and damaging effect on the society. When people see aggression behavior on tv they try to copy it because is something normal. Computer games is a provide a place for violence network hence people will be impatience to their friend and family. Sometimes television producations are broadcast series that unsuitable for kids and it makes problem because they do not know the differences between reality and series. In conclusion, Any doubts violence is bad source and influence on the society.

The issue of the violence on television and computer games.

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positive
, Thus
 when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's play computer games or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 on television there is an impact and damaging effect on the society.

When This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 aggression behavior on Possible spelling mistake found.TVtoMTVCTVTTUV
tv
 they try to copy it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 is something normal.

Computer games is After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'provide' is correct. If 'provide' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a provide
 a place for violence network hence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will be impatience to their friend and family.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 television Possible spelling mistake found.productions
producations
 are broadcast series that unsuitable for kids and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they do not know the differences between reality and series.

In conclusion
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doubts
 violence is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 source and influence on the society. 