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Some people believe that using public transports can be greatly beneficial to both people and the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (You should write at least 250 words)

Some people believe that using public transports can be greatly beneficial to both people and the environment. () 73YGn
It is usually believed that using public transports can be very advantageous to both people and our habitat. But others don’t think so. To my mind, I agree with the first one because public transports have fewer exhaust fumes than personal transport. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of using public transport. There are many advantages of using public transport. Firstly, it can help to reduce pollution, especially in the big cities. Public transports cause fewer exhaust fumes than cars and motorbikes. Exhaust fumes can harm both people’s health and the environment. If fewer exhaust fumes are released into our environment, pollution will be reduced. People can breathe fresh air. Moreover, using public transport can save you money. Its ticket is cheap for everyone to buy. So that, people don’t have to buy their own transport. If they don’t have their own transport, they also won’t have to lose money to fill up and park the car. Besides, there will be fewer traffic jams when everyone uses public transport. For example, we have bus lanes that are special lanes for public buses. So that all transports move easier. On the other hand, using public transport still has some disadvantages. It is true that sometimes, public transports are unsafe. Many criminal activities have been found on buses or trains. Then it is much more comfortable to use personal transport. You don’t have to sit with strangers and you can do what you want.
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believed that using
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transports
can be
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very
advantageous to both
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people
and our habitat.
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others don’t
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think
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so
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agree
with the
first
one
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because
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public
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transports
have fewer
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exhaust
fumes than personal
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transport
. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of using
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public
transport.

There are
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many
advantages of using
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public
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transport
.
Firstly
, it can
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help
to
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reduce
pollution,
especially
in the
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big
cities.
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Public
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transports
cause fewer
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exhaust
fumes than cars and motorbikes.
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Exhaust
fumes can harm both
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people’s
health and the environment. If fewer
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exhaust
fumes
are released
into our environment, pollution will be
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reduced
.
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People
can breathe fresh air.
Moreover
, using
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public
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transport
can save you money. Its ticket is
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cheap
for everyone to
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buy
.
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So
that,
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people
don’t
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have to
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buy
their
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own
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transport
. If they don’t have their
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own
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transport
, they
also
won’t
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have to
lose money to fill up and park the car.
Besides
, there will be fewer traffic jams when everyone
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uses
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public
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transport
.
For example
, we have bus lanes that are special lanes for
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public
buses.
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So that
all
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transports
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move
easier.

On the other hand
, using
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public
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transport
still
has
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some
disadvantages. It is true that
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sometimes
,
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public
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transports
are unsafe.
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Many
criminal activities have
been found
on buses or trains. Then it is much more comfortable to
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use
personal
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transport
. You don’t
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have to
sit with strangers and you can do what you want.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that using public transports can be greatly beneficial to both people and the environment. ()

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
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