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young people shouldn choose their profession instead of letting their parents choose for them.

young people shouldn choose their profession instead of letting their parents choose for them. Xqgpw

Choosing the right career path is a challenge for some young people. Knowing that, so their parents choose their future profession. But not everyone wants that. Some young people pursure their passions and dream job. But in my opinion, I have 2 view for that issue. As we all know, parents always worried about our future. They always want the best thing for their child, and they have more knowleged than us. Furthermore, based on their experience, they know which job is to choose. For example, a father who is a doctor will know which job is good and has convinient for his future child. Because no parent want their children to do manual, or hard work. Beside, pressure from society, relatives is also a reason why parents choose job for their children. However, in the modern life, teenagers also have a various perception and decision about the profession they like. Not all youth accept the profession that their family choose. Some of them willing to listen to their family, study their parents’s choice but only for 1 to 2 years, then they give up. It’s not only hurts the parents but also affects the time of that child. Today, youth play an important role in development of society, and their opinions should be respected by all. Through the above ideas, people can pursure their passion and careers. but beside that, they must listen to the advice of their parents,

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