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Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main from of transport has a lot of advantages and disadvantages ?

Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main from of transport has a lot of advantages and disadvantages? GJVdo
It is true that, nowadays communities has been think that using cycle is a good transport rather than own car and public transport. This essay will discuss in merit and demerits in following paragraphs. To commence with, there are several fact using a bicycle first of one is that environmental is good because cycling is not produced chemicals and harmful air as well as liquid. To explain it, bicycle is one kind a green vehicle is the past as well as present which are not required any types of fuel and material which are dangerous our atmosphere. For example, according to survey 80 percent people use to cycling then after our atmosphere and ozone layer it should clean and given a natural air even quality oxygen produce. Thus, numerous of benefits for commuted by bicycle. In addition, some people think that bicycle one of the best exercise. In addition, some companies CEO, employees and rich person has been going to work and offices. In recently, government should trying a numerous of programs which related for cycling is good like awareness. On the other hand, there are numerous kinds of disadvantages is that, individuals and persons used to bicycle. To explicate it, cycle using a one person which is demerits, even sometimes important work that time not preference bicycle. For instance, in international research finding that cycling is most important but not need to daily work and chores. Because sometimes important work their we not to used a bicycle such as emergency, interviews, carrying shopping many more. As a result, bicyclenwe use to but many time a barriers about sometimes and function. In conclusion, few people think that good transport we are using a bicycle but it is a negative effects on work and occasionally function.
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that using cycle is a
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car and public transport. This essay will discuss in merit and demerits in following paragraphs.

To commence with, there are
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using a
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bicycle
first
of one is that environmental is
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good
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because
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cycling
is not produced chemicals and harmful air
as well
as liquid. To
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explain
it,
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bicycle
is one kind a green vehicle is the past
as well
as present which are not required any types of fuel and material which are
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dangerous
our atmosphere.
For example
, according to survey 80 percent
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people
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use
to
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cycling
then after our atmosphere and ozone layer it should clean and
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given
a natural air even quality oxygen produce.
Thus
, numerous of benefits for commuted by
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bicycle
.
In addition
,
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some
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people
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that
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one of the best exercise.
In addition
,
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some
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companies
CEO, employees and rich person has been going to
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work
and offices.
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recently,
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should
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a numerous of
programs which related for
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cycling
is
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good
like awareness.
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, there are numerous kinds of disadvantages is that, individuals and persons
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used
to
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bicycle
. To explicate it, cycle using a one person which is demerits, even
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sometimes
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important
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work
that time not preference
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bicycle
.
For instance
, in international research finding that
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cycling
is most
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important
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but
not need to daily
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work
and chores.
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sometimes
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important
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work
their we not to
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such as emergency, interviews, carrying shopping
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more.
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,
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many time
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about
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and function.
In conclusion
, few
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people
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that
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good
transport we are using a
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bicycle
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but
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work
and
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function.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main from of transport has a lot of advantages and disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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