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Some people believe that uniforms at workplaces aren’t necessary. Do you agree or disagree with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. v.1

Some people believe that uniforms at workplaces aren’t necessary. with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. v. 1
Some companies do test that their fresh staffs are not adequate basic interpersonal qualities like communication or team work skills. This essay will discuss relative issues and the measures that universities and individual people can take to address this concern. To begin with, one main reason causing the problem of personal skills is due to the lack of practical experience. To be more specific, tertiary education has no programs for students about more soft-skills to interact with colleges and to create a crucial plan for their teams in their futures. In addition, students solely concentrate on studious mission, a higher mark and a perfect degree as universities educate about in-depth knowledge and professional lectures, which have a negative effect on the flexibility and creativity during the prospective team-work period. Schools could certainly make more effort to boost their student’s qualifications. Firstly, they should open a wide range of skill courses before graduation, which improves educational outcomes. Last but not least, they either combine internship time with thesis preparation duration to widen the communication ability between same-aged students, or insert teamwork assignment such as team-building games into curriculum from first school years. In this way, people are likely to have a great chance to exchange their study experience and to manage groups. In conclusion, it becomes apparent that there are various reasons for new employees in companies are not enough knowledge to cooperate with each other and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem. The issue needs to be taken care by not only schools but also undergraduate students
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test
that their fresh staffs are not adequate basic interpersonal qualities like communication or team work
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skills
. This essay will discuss relative issues and the measures that universities and individual
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people
can take to address this concern.

To
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begin
with, one main reason causing the problem of personal
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skills
is due to the lack of practical experience. To be more specific, tertiary education has no programs for
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students
about more soft-
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skills
to interact with colleges and to create a crucial plan for their teams in their futures.
In addition
,
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students
solely
concentrate on studious mission, a higher mark and a perfect degree as universities educate about in-depth knowledge and professional lectures, which have a
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negative
effect on the flexibility and creativity during the prospective team-work period.

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certainly
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make
more effort to boost their
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student’s
qualifications.
Firstly
, they should open a wide range of
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skill
courses
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before
graduation, which
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improves
educational outcomes. Last
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but
not least, they either combine internship time with thesis preparation duration to widen the communication ability between same-aged
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students
, or insert teamwork assignment such as team-building games into curriculum from
first
school years. In this way,
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people
are likely to have a great chance to exchange their study experience and to manage groups.

In conclusion
, it becomes apparent that there are various reasons for new employees in
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companies
are not
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enough
knowledge to cooperate with each other and steps need to
be taken
to tackle this problem. The issue needs to
be taken
care by not
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only
schools
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but
also
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students
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that uniforms at workplaces aren’t necessary. with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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