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some people believe that trying to save endangered species wastes valuable time and resources when there are more urgent problems in the world. To what extent do you agree with this idea.

some people believe that trying to save endangered species wastes valuable time and resources when there are more urgent problems in the world. 2xM0j
Currently, certain types of animals or plants are endangered, and trying to save some of their variants from extinction is a waste of precious resources. I disagree with this opinion. Here are a few of my thoughts on the matter. It is a fact that humans are trying to save endangered animals day by day as to pass on to the next generations. In addition, this action to preserve what is available of nature. On the other hand, such activities do not waste valuable resources, but action is extremely practical because it does a good thing for nature because it can help the cycles in nature. happens in the most natural way. For example, animals such as polar bears, deer, wolves and bears - these animals play an important role in the natural cycle. By protecting endangered animals, individuals and organizations preserve animal and plant resources. Instead of spending time and money to restore forests, let's preserve the primeval forests. By doing so, we can keep rare animals and perfect green forests without spending money and without wasting resources. In short, trying to keep endangered animals or all other living cells from being in danger of extinction is not a waste of resources, but can preserve the very essence of nature. course. Those are all my views on the matter.
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, certain types of
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animals
or plants are
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endangered
, and trying to save
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some
of their variants from extinction is a waste of precious resources. I disagree with this opinion. Here are a few of my thoughts on the matter.

It is a fact that humans are trying to save
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endangered
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animals
day by day as to pass on to the
next
generations.
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, this action to
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preserve
what is available of
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nature
.
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, such activities do not waste valuable resources,
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action is
extremely
practical
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because
it does a
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good
thing for
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nature
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because
it can
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help
the cycles in
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nature
.
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happens
in the most natural way.
For example
,
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animals
such as polar bears, deer, wolves and bears
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-
these
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animals
play an
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important
role in the natural cycle.

By protecting
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endangered
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animals
, individuals and organizations
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preserve
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animal
and plant resources.
Instead
of spending time and money to restore forests,
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let
's
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preserve
the primeval forests. By doing
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so
, we can
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keep
rare
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animals
and perfect green forests without spending money and without wasting resources.

In short, trying to
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keep
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endangered
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animals
or all other living cells from being in
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danger
of extinction is not a waste of resources,
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but
can
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preserve
the
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very
essence of
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nature
.
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course
. Those are all my views on the matter.
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IELTS essay some people believe that trying to save endangered species wastes valuable time and resources when there are more urgent problems in the world.

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