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Write a short essay (100-120 words) about a natural wonder.

Write a short essay (100-120 words) about a natural wonder. 3WV8d
In my hometown, one of the most famous natural wonders is Ha Long Bay in Quang Ninh province. It is surrounded by islands, limestone caves, rocks with many strange shapes making this place a landscape that cannot be found anywhere else. In the bay, there are many interesting activities, extreme sports such as paragliding, scuba diving, or you can go to explore caves, sightseeing on yachts and discover specialties here. The best time for you to fully enjoy your vacation is from March to April, every morning you can watch the sunset, enjoy the majestic and charming scenery in the fresh weather.
In my hometown, one of the most
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natural wonders is Ha Long Bay in
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Quang
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Ninh
province. It
is surrounded
by islands, limestone caves, rocks with
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many
strange shapes making this place a landscape that cannot
be found
anywhere else. In the bay, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
interesting activities, extreme sports such as paragliding, scuba diving, or you can go to explore caves, sightseeing on yachts and discover specialties here. The best time for you to
fully
enjoy your vacation is from March to April, every morning you can
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watch
the sunset, enjoy the majestic and charming scenery in the fresh weather.
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IELTS essay Write a short essay (100-120 words) about a natural wonder.

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