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some people believe that the children should be given calculators at their examination

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A certain propotion of individual assert that numerical machines should be given to youngsters. Eventhough some narrow sighted people advocate this sugestions personally I solidly raised my hand with the people who denied this idea and this essay will explore the reasons along with the summery. There are significant reasons to showcase why numerical scientific is not allowed teenagers. First of all, If machine are given to youngsters, They will become thoughtless. What I meant by this is, prematured children learn their critical thinking based on numerical values and calculations that is foremost important a developing a child. Consequently, Primary and secondary education sector will collapsed with poor maths marks. Another point worth noting is, children become lazy, when they are having calculators. This is because, main part of the maths is done by calculators, only children have to do entering numbers. As a result of this, youngsters are distracting from education sector. For instance, according to recent research done by university of canada west revealed that, 60 percent of youngsters were distracting from their school life in between the period of 2005 to 2019. So, this is very good testimonial to show why children should not be given calculators. To encapsulate my writing, I reiterate that juvenile should not used numerical scientific machine, since it make create children with poor thought as well as the hardless to their education, that are foremost important to academic establishment of child therefore, government should initiate regular policies to banned calculators.
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children
learn their critical thinking based on
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numerical
values and calculations
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marks. Another point worth noting is,
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should initiate regular policies to banned calculators.
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IELTS essay some people believe that the children should be given calculators at their examination

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2 paragraphs
248 words
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