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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But, others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it is argued by myriad of intellectuals that instead of focusing on different academic subjects students should focus only on the subjects they are interested in; however others opine in an opposite manner. This essay will discuss both the views and will also suggest my opinion on such trendTo begin with, individuals in the favour of such trend stated that it would be beneficial for students as they can concentrate only on their area of intrest. Also according to a research different subjects in school life these days is a reason for increasing stress on young birds of our society hence such trend would reduce burden on young shoulders

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different
 academic subjects students should focus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on the subjects they are interested
 in; however
 others opine Consider replacing "in an opposite manner" with the adverb for "opposite"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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begin
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only
 on their area of Possible spelling mistake found.interestint rest
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different
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stress
 on young birds of our society hence
 such trend would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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