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Some people believe that Teachers should maintain the class rules,others opinion Only students obey the rules.discuss both of side and give your Opinion

Some people believe that Teachers should maintain the class rules, others opinion Only students obey the rules. discuss both of side and give your Opinion 2KRqM
Teachers is the founder of nation. they can change the world. in this essay some people think that only teachers maintain the class rules. others Opinion students should obey the rules. i intend to discuss both of side. Teachers is the person who lead our nation. they help us to built up our life. also mentor of OUR life journey. So everyone should respect them and abide by their rules. all students are not good at study some are naughty they disturbed others in class. so class roles should be maintains all of them.
Teachers is the founder of nation.
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they
can
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change
the world.
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in
this essay
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some
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people
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think
that
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only
teachers maintain the
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class
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rules
.
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others
Opinion students should obey the
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rules
.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
intend to discuss both of side. Teachers is the person who lead our nation.
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they
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help
us to built up our life.
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also
mentor of OUR life journey.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
everyone should respect them and abide by their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
all
students are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at study
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
are naughty they disturbed others in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.
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so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
roles should be
Consider using the past participle "maintained"?
maintains
all of them.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that Teachers should maintain the class rules, others opinion Only students obey the rules. discuss both of side and give your Opinion

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  American English
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94 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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