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Thanks for offering to read over this document, Here is the letter I've drafted to Jonathan. Please let me know what you think. Dear Jonathan, I am writing this email as a follow-up to my email of 5 August 2020, in which I very reasonably requested a fuller explanation of the workload increase indicated on our team's contract renewal. As you know, our office's weekly workload should add up to 37. 5 hours however, our new contract adds up to 39 hours. Many members of our department are unsure of whether or qt this discrepancy represents a change in policy or an error in drafting the The office would like you to explain yourself. In light of the fact that the new contract takes effect 1 October 2020, we are hoping to receive a response before that date. Sorry I sound impatient with you in this note, but our office needs you to write a response so that thev can anticipate and manage their work-related duties effectively. I insist that you get back to me as soon as possible on this matter. If you have any questions or concerns, you can reach me at 519-111-3333. I look forward to your reply.
Thanks for offering to read over this document, Here is the letter I've drafted to Jonathan.
Please


let
me know what you
think
.

Dear Jonathan,

I am writing this email as a follow-up to my email of 5 August 2020, in which I
very


reasonably
requested a fuller explanation of the workload increase indicated on our team's

contract renewal. As you know, our office's weekly workload should
add
up to 37. 5 hours

however
, our new contract
adds
up to 39 hours.
Many
members of our department are unsure

of whether or qt this discrepancy represents a
change
in policy or an error in drafting
the The
office would like you to
explain
yourself. In light of the fact that the new contract takes

effect 1 October 2020, we are hoping to receive a response
before
that date. Sorry I sound

impatient with you in this note,
but
our office needs you to write a response
so
that
thev
can

anticipate and manage their work-related duties
effectively
.

I insist that you
get
back to me as
soon
as possible on this matter. If you have any questions or

concerns, you can reach me at 519-111-3333. I look forward to your reply.
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IELTS essay Email to your employee for checking

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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