Some people think that taking risks and chances will lead them to success. From my everyday experience and observation, I believe that success results from careful planning. I base my position on the following points.
First of all, I believe that careful planning helps a person to analyse his goal more deeply and make realistic goals. He knows exactly what he wants. Taking chances, from the other hand, does not give the opportunity to clearly understand a goal. A person just wants to do something to move forward and he takes risks when there is no need of it. A fixed plan helps a person to achieve it and make the person more determined and object oriented than those who don’t have a fixed aim.
Second, careful planning teaches people to arrange their time more carefully in order to reach their goals. They become more patient and calm. They plan every step. This allows people to find an easier way to reach their goals and move forward faster. From the other hand, people who prefer to take risks without planning may spend more time without any improvements waiting for a chance to take. Take sportsmen for example. They exercise a lot before their performance to be in shape, do all their best and improve their previous results.
Finally, careful planning teaches them not to give up, try to find other ways to reach their goals in the case of failure. To sum up, personally, I think that all people who succeeded in life would agree with me that their success came with the hard work and careful planning.
Some
people
think
that taking
risks
and chances will lead them to success. From my everyday experience and observation, I believe that success results from
careful
planning
. I base my position on the following points.
First of all
, I believe that
careful
planning
helps
a
person
to
analyse
his
goal
more
deeply
and
make
realistic
goals
. He knows exactly what he wants. Taking chances, from the other hand, does not give the opportunity to
clearly
understand a
goal
. A
person
just
wants to do something to
move
forward and
he takes
risks
when there is no need of it. A
fixed
plan
helps
a
person
to achieve it and
make
the
person
more determined and
object oriented
than those who don’t have a
fixed
aim.
Second,
careful
planning
teaches
people
to arrange their time more
carefully
in order to reach their
goals
. They become more patient and calm. They plan every step. This
allows
people
to find an easier way to reach their
goals
and
move
forward faster. From the other hand,
people
who prefer to take
risks
without
planning
may spend more time without any improvements waiting for a chance to take. Take sportsmen
for example
. They exercise a lot
before
their performance to be in shape, do all their best and
improve
their previous results.
Finally
,
careful
planning
teaches them not to give up, try to find other ways to reach their
goals
in the case of failure. To sum up,
personally
, I
think
that all
people
who succeeded in life would
agree
with me that their success came with the
hard
work and
careful
planning
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes