Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.5
Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 5
There are opposing views about whether financing on building train and subway lines, traffic jams can be solved or whether the government should build more and wider roads to reduce traffic congestion. While I understand why some people support the former view, I am still in favour of the latter.
People who believe that building more train and subway lines can bring some benefits to ease traffic congestion. From their point of view, The nations concentrate on building train and subway lines, which means people increase the chance of using public transport. By doing this, spending a few money for ticket fee, especially them also no pay charge road tolls, fossil fuels. This helps people to save money, prevent air pollution. Another point to be made is citizens can use train, subway instead of private car at rush hour. This prevents them from being stuck in traffic congestion.
Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe the nations should build more and wider roads in order to reduce traffic jams. This is due to the fact that the government builds plenty of roads, which increase the likelihood driving private automobiles. By doing this, people have more comfortable seats and provide private space. In addition, if the governments build more and wider roads which are not too costly, they will not bear the financial burden. Therefore, this solution is more realistic.
In conclusion, despite acknowledging why people think spending money on building train and subway lines can help people to reduce traffic jams, I hold the belief that the government should build more and wider roads so as to reduce traffic congestion.
There are opposing views about whether financing on
building
train
and
subway
lines
,
traffic
jams can
be solved
or whether the
government
should
build
more and
wider
roads
to
reduce
traffic
congestion. While I understand why
some
people
support the former view, I am
still
in
favour
of the latter.
People
who believe that
building
more
train
and
subway
lines
can bring
some
benefits to
ease
traffic
congestion. From their point of view, The nations concentrate on
building
train
and
subway
lines
, which means
people
increase the chance of using public transport. By doing this, spending
a few money
for ticket fee,
especially
them
also
no pay charge
road
tolls, fossil fuels. This
helps
people
to save money,
prevent
air pollution. Another point to
be made
is citizens can
use
train
,
subway
instead
of private car at rush hour. This
prevents
them from
being stuck
in
traffic
congestion.
Nevertheless
, I
still
side with those who believe the nations should
build
more and
wider
roads
in order to
reduce
traffic
jams.
This is due to the fact that
the
government
builds
plenty
of
roads
, which increase the likelihood driving private automobiles. By doing this,
people
have more comfortable seats and provide private space.
In addition
, if the
governments
build
more and
wider
roads
which are not too costly, they will not bear the financial burden.
Therefore
, this solution is more realistic.
In conclusion
, despite acknowledging why
people
think
spending money on
building
train
and
subway
lines
can
help
people
to
reduce
traffic
jams, I hold the belief that the
government
should
build
more and
wider
roads
so as to
reduce
traffic
congestion.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes