We have witnessed hundreds of stories about a person successfulness, and we often wonder how they can do it. Personally, I believe that triumph is the result of hard working and perseverance and luck only a tiny factor in order to achieve a favourable outcome.
To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that success will not be obtained without diligent works. In other words, strong determination, confidence and desire to achieve positive things in life should always be cherished in your heart and mind, and these feelings con only be fulfilled through laborious actions, not by luck itself. For instance, there are numerous of outstanding leaders who have reached the summit of success by experiencing various of feelings, obstacles and multi ups and downs in their early stage of life. Thus, it is proved that fate is not a factor that control a person.
Furthermore, to clarify my opinion, it is said that “No pain, no gain”, therefore, the given quote proves that no such gain comes without any hard works. To put it more simply, one has to enforce strong steps to reach their victory. For example, Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple took his opportunity, then turned it into significant results.
Nevertheless, some still believe that luck plays a huge role in their growth. However, luck is a one-time event or it does not come to you in time, some billionaires never witness luck but they still achieve their results in triumph by hard working.
To summarise, perseverance, determination and willingness to take risks are the key factors leading you to success in life. Therefore, we should be focused on ourselves and not waiting for luck. 
We have witnessed hundreds of stories about a person successfulness, and we  
often
 wonder how they can do it.  
Personally
, I believe that triumph is the result of  
hard working
 and perseverance and luck  
only
 a tiny factor in order to achieve a  
favourable
 outcome.
To  
begin
 with, it is an undeniable fact that success will not  
be obtained
 without diligent works.  
In other words
, strong determination, confidence and desire to achieve  
positive
 things in life should always  
be cherished
 in your heart and mind, and these feelings con  
only
  be fulfilled
 through laborious actions, not by luck itself.  
For instance
, there are numerous of outstanding leaders who have reached the summit of success by experiencing various of feelings, obstacles and multi ups and downs in their early stage of life.  
Thus
, it  
is proved
 that fate is not a factor that control a person. 
Furthermore
, to clarify my opinion, it  
is said
 that “No pain, no gain”,  
therefore
, the  
given
 quote proves that no such gain  
comes
 without any  
hard
 works. To put it more  
simply
, one  
has to
 enforce strong steps to reach their victory.  
For example
, Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple took his opportunity, then turned it into significant results. 
Nevertheless
,  
some
  still
 believe that luck plays a huge role in their growth.  
However
, luck is a one-time  
event
 or it does not  
come
 to you in time,  
some
 billionaires never witness luck  
but
 they  
still
 achieve their results in triumph by  
hard working
.
To  
summarise
, perseverance, determination and willingness to take  
risks
 are the key factors leading you to success in life.  
Therefore
, we should  
be focused
 on ourselves and not waiting for luck.