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Some people believe that students have planty of time and this time should be provided in completing the home-work do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that students have planty of time and this time should be provided in completing the home-work PLpwK
Several people deem that students are provided of spare time and further they expect that this time should be utilize to do more school work. This essay delineates about, how people think students should devote their time in school work, followed by my views of spending their leisure time. To embark with, there are a profusion of school, which gives umpteen home work to the children so that they can do at home in their spare time. A plethora of educators believe that recatitulation the concept at home will make children understand the concept better. Moreover, there are a myriad of teachers, who wants weak students to concetrate more on their school work so that they can cope-up with the syllabus and thier classmates. last but on the least, a lot of educators, assign projects or charts for display board of schools which students tend to do the same at home for examplify, on parentes-teachres meeting, parents have often observed that their child's work has been displayed at the back board in the class. However, spending idle time in persuaing school work at home will only make them academically successfull. So one should give importance to other aspect of curiculam. Primarly, one must take intiative in vocational subjects such as cooking knitting gardening and many more for which their creativity and innovation world increase by leaps and bounds along with academic aspect. Furthermore, pupils should watch television channels like national geographic and can also see some educational or decent series on netflix by which not only they receive knowledge but also assist them in upgrading their language and listening skills additoinaly, so unprove their reading skills one should read more often in their extra time. whats more the most important and recreational way of spending spare time is to play some sort of outdoor or indoor games participating in sprots keeps both mindand body fit and healthy example in the evening children should go out to play in natural enviroment such as park. To conclude, every child should utilise their idle time judiciously so that it can benefit them in both curicular and co-curricular activities hence in this way their overall personality will enhance better.
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should be
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school
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. This essay delineates about, how
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people
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think
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students
should devote their
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in
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school
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work
, followed by my views of spending their leisure time.

To embark with, there are a profusion of
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school
, which gives umpteen home
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work
to the children
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so
that they can do at home in their spare
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time
. A plethora of educators believe that
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recatitulation
the concept at home will
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make
children understand the concept better.
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, there are a
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myriad
of teachers, who wants weak
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students
to
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concetrate
more on their
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school
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work
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so
that they can cope-up with the syllabus and
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thier
classmates.
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last
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on the least,
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a lot of
educators, assign projects or charts for display board of
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schools
which
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students
tend to do the same at home for
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examplify
, on
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parentes-teachres
meeting, parents have
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often
observed that their child's
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work
has
been displayed
at the back board in the
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class
.

However
, spending idle
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time
in
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persuaing
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school
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work
at home will
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only
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make
them
academically
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successfull
.
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one should give importance to other aspect of
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curiculam
.
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, one
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must
take
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intiative
in vocational subjects such as cooking knitting gardening and
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many
more for which their creativity and innovation world increase by leaps and bounds along with academic aspect.
Furthermore
, pupils should
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watch
television channels like national geographic and can
also
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see
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some
educational or decent series on
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netflix
by which not
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only
they receive knowledge
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but
also
assist them in upgrading their language and listening
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skills
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additoinaly
,
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so
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unprove
their reading
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one should read more
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often
in their extra
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.
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whats
more the most
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important
and recreational way of spending spare
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is to play
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some
sort of outdoor or indoor games participating in
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sprots
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keeps
both
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mindand
body fit and healthy example in the evening children should go out to play in natural
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enviroment
such as park.

To conclude
, every child should
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utilise
their idle
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time
judiciously
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so
that it can benefit them in both
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curicular
and co-curricular activities
hence
in this way their
overall
personality will enhance better.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that students have planty of time and this time should be provided in completing the home-work

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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