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Some people believe that sports teach children how to compete while others believe that children learn how to work in a team with other, rather than against them. Discus Both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that sports teach children how to compete while others believe that children learn how to work in a team with other, rather than against them. Discus Both views and give your opinion KnwA0

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