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art, and how the idea we had about it has changed over time due to the circumstances of life, so we go through every day.

art, and how the idea we had about it has changed over time due to the circumstances of life, so we go through every day. QVLA3
In this essay I will be talking about a topic that is so important we make ourselves conscious. The topic I'm referring to is art, and how the idea we had about it has changed over time due to the circumstances of life, so we go through every day. It is a fact that when you think of the culture of some place you can think of: food, clothes, traditions, etc. But something that will always be a very important factor in all places is the distinctive art of the region. Art, as we know, is a form of expression in which the past or present of a place is interpreted in different ways keeping the history of something. With the past of the years, the importance we give to things has changed due to the changes that society undergoes with inventions and advances. In the past, it was believed that it was very interesting and remarkable that someone knew how to paint, or was a good sculptor. Nowadays, scientists or technologists are more recognized with the society related to art and all its branches. To make everything a little clearer I want to give an example. Albert Einstein, a very recognized scientist in the 20th century was a promoter of science and was highly valued. On the contrary, Carlos Slim is an entrepreneur who moves an entire country with his business. Here is a clear example that in the past, the businessman would not be so valued and viceversa today with the artist. In conclusion, all aspects that surround a society such as: technology, science, business and art are very important parts to serve the united groups. There has to be an important balance so that they continue to grow and support each other attracting the attention of society.
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we go through every day.

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of the culture of
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factor in all places is the distinctive
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art
of the region.
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, as we know, is a form of expression in which the
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past
or present of a place
is interpreted
in
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different
ways keeping the history of something.

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of the years, the importance we give to things has
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changed
due to the
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society
undergoes with inventions and advances. In the
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past
, it
was believed
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interesting and remarkable that someone knew how to paint, or was a
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sculptor. Nowadays, scientists or technologists are more recognized with the
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society
related to
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art
and all its branches.

To
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everything a
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clearer I want to give an example. Albert Einstein, a
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very
recognized scientist in the 20th century was a promoter of science and was
highly
valued.
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, Carlos Slim is an entrepreneur who
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moves
an entire country with his business. Here is a
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clear
example that in the
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past
, the businessman would not be
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so
valued and
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today
with the artist.

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, all aspects that surround a
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society
such as: technology, science, business and
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art
are
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important
parts to serve the united groups. There
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be an
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balance
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that they continue to grow and support each other attracting the attention of
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IELTS essay art, and how the idea we had about it has changed over time due to the circumstances of life, so we go through every day.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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