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Some people believe that scientific research should be carried out by government only not by private companies. To what extent do you agree? v.1

Some people believe that scientific research should be carried out by government only not by private companies. v. 1
Close friendships are very important, even though sometimes they can be challenging to maintain. Even when a close friend is understanding, honest, and fun, the friendship can suffer when the complications of life cause friends drift apart. However, many people believe that relation can be meaningful and special, but also very complicated and I totally agree with it. Friends can fulfil many roles, but one of the most important is to be understood. When someone is struggling, perhaps with an illness, a death in the family, or a recent breakup, a good friend will listen carefully and offer support without judgement. Friends are also honest. They will not say one thing to your face, but do something else later. A true friend will also tell the truth, even if it is uncomfortable. For instance, she will offer her real opinion about your latest hairstyle, even if she thinks it looks terrible. Finally, a healthy friendship is fun. Friends know how making each other laugh, and love to spend moments doing things that both find enjoyable. Sometimes, the most meaningful moments between great friends can be as simple as having a good conversation over coffee. However, even close friendships can fade over instance. The main culprit, at least in my experience, is that friends drift apart because other priorities get in the way. When people are young, it is very easy to spend a lot of moments with friends. Yet, with age comes new responsibilities and much less opportunity to devote to others. New parents, for example, do not have much space to do anything other than focus on their baby. Work also puts pressure. Getting up early in the morning, meeting deadlines, and attending social events can severely limit the amount of time that’s left to devote to friends. All of these factors can take a toll. Without regular contact, a friendship can easily fade. In a nutshell, even when great friends have been separated for a long period, they often still feel very close. Great friendships can withstand great challenges when two people share a deep connection.
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friendships
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important
,
even though
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sometimes
they can be challenging
Did you mean "maintaining"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to maintain
. Even when a
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close
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friend
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is understanding
, honest, and fun, the
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friendship
can suffer when the complications of life cause
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friends
drift apart.
However
,
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many
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people
believe that relation can be meaningful and special,
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but
also
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very
complicated and I
totally
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agree
with it.

Friends can fulfil
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many
roles,
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but
one of the most
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important
is to
be understood
. When someone is struggling, perhaps with an illness, a death in the family, or a recent breakup, a
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good
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friend
will listen
carefully
and offer support without judgement.
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Friends
are
also
honest. They will not say one thing to your face,
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but
do something else later. A true
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friend
will
also
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tell
the truth, even if it is uncomfortable.
For instance
, she will offer her real opinion about your latest hairstyle, even if she
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thinks
it looks terrible.
Finally
, a healthy
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friendship
is fun.
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Friends
know how making each
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other
laugh, and
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love
to spend moments doing things that both find enjoyable.
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Sometimes
, the most meaningful moments between
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great
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friends
can be as simple as having a
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good
conversation over coffee.

However
, even
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close
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friendships
can fade over instance. The main culprit, at least in my experience, is that
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friends
drift apart
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because
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other
priorities
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get
in the way. When
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people
are young, it is
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very
easy to spend
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a lot of
moments with
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friends
.
Yet
, with age
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comes
new responsibilities and much less opportunity to devote to others. New parents,
for example
, do not have much space to do anything
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other
than focus on their baby. Work
also
puts pressure. Getting up early in the morning, meeting deadlines, and attending social
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events
can
severely
limit the amount of time that’s
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left
to devote to
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friends
. All of these factors can take a toll. Without regular contact, a
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friendship
can
easily
fade.

In a nutshell, even when
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great
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friends
have
been separated
for a long period, they
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often
still
feel
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very
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close
.
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Great
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friendships
can withstand
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great
challenges when two
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people
share a deep connection.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people believe that scientific research should be carried out by government only not by private companies. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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