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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework while others claim that homework is very important in education. 

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework while others claim that homework is very important in education. Xlg0E
In the contemporary period, whether the home assignments should be excluded from the curriculum or not has become one of the controversial topics in educational systems. From my point of view, homework can be considered as an integral part of education in terms of several reasons despite the opposite sides’ arguments. On the one hand, several critics claim that homework should not be considered as a mandatory activity during the educational process. First of all, home assignments can make the students weary during a day, as a result, they might face lack of time to track their interests. Especially, when the number of assignments outweighs the usual workload, the level of fatigue during a day could inevitably increase. Therefore, based viewpoint of some critics, to let the students find the best place in which they feel comfortable in advance, homework should not be a mandatorily required activity in the educational institutions. However, I firmly believe that homework should be the main part of the education process. First of all, assigned homework owns the potential ability to reinforce students’ knowledge gained at schools. Practice makes the learning capabilities awesomely strong, therefore, students should dedicate sufficient amount of time to own sophisticated skills directly coming through home assignments from early ages. Moreover, home assignments play a huge role for students to adapt an appropriate and planned ritual for education. While feeling the responsibilities of assigned tasks, students instinctively get prepared to the working environment as they will be assigned specific tasks to complete during a day. Having owned such kind of approach to the responsibilities, those students can quickly get promoted to the hierarchically better positions due to their perspectives to the tasks which is a direct outcome of the approach to the home tasks assigned during the school years. To sum up, notwithstanding it is believed that homework ought to be put aside in the curriculum shaped for school children, it is my belief that assigned home tasks can be considered as the best tool for pupils to strengthen the newly covered topics and own unique approach to the assigned tasks in future.
In the contemporary period, whether the home
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assignments
should
be excluded
from the curriculum or not has become one of the controversial topics in educational systems. From my point of view,
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homework
can
be considered
as an integral part of education in terms of several reasons despite the opposite sides’ arguments.

On the one hand, several critics claim that
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homework
should not
be considered
as a mandatory activity during the educational process.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, home
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assignments
can
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make
the
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students
weary during a day,
as a result
, they might face lack of time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
their interests.
Especially
, when the number of
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assignments
outweighs the usual workload, the level of fatigue during a day could
inevitably
increase.
Therefore
, based viewpoint of
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some
critics, to
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let
the
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students
find the best place in which they feel comfortable in advance,
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homework
should not be a
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mandatorily
required activity in the educational institutions.

However
, I
firmly
believe that
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homework
should be the main part of the education process.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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assigned
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homework
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owns
the potential ability to reinforce
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students’
knowledge gained at schools. Practice
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the learning capabilities
awesomely
strong,
therefore
,
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students
should dedicate sufficient amount of time to
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own
sophisticated
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skills
directly
coming through home
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assignments
from early ages.
Moreover
, home
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assignments
play a huge role for
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students
to adapt an appropriate and planned ritual for education. While feeling the responsibilities of
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assigned
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tasks
,
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students
instinctively
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get
prepared to the working environment as they will be
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assigned
specific
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tasks
to complete during a day. Having
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owned
such kind of approach to the responsibilities, those
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students
can
quickly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
promoted to the
hierarchically
better positions due to their perspectives to the
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tasks
which is a direct outcome of the approach to the home
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tasks
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assigned
during the school years.

To sum up, notwithstanding it
is believed
that
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homework
ought to
be put
aside in the curriculum shaped for school children, it is my belief that
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assigned
home
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tasks
can
be considered
as the best tool for pupils to strengthen the
newly
covered topics and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
unique approach to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
assigned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

IELTS essay Some people believe that school children should not be given homework while others claim that homework is very important in education.

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