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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.5

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. v. 5
A common question that’s been asked by parents who are concerned about their children’s studies is whether it is necessary to give them homework every day. In this essay I will highlight the important reasons why homework is an important part of a child’s education. Firstly most people believe that homework should not be given as it has the opposite effect of its intended purpose while others say that it is the most important part of a student’s education. While it can be argued that giving children homework everyday can put a lot of stress on the child and sometimes even become something of a burden for them, homework is still important as it can act as a sort of test for what the child learns in school and also better prepares them for when they have to solve real world problems independently. Secondly, homework also helps the parents of the children by giving them an idea of what their kids are being taught in school, helping them to better interact with their own children. It also gives an opportunity to the children to explore the subjects more fully as they wouldn’t have enough time to cover it all in the classroom. Homework also helps the child to develop self discipline and provides them with a sense of responsibility. In conclusion, I think homework is a very important part of a child’s education and shouldn’t be compromised, but it should be given in more understandable quantity as too much it can become a burden on the youth and lead to stress.
A common question that’s
been asked
by parents who
are concerned
about their
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children’s
studies is whether it is necessary to give them
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homework
every day. In this essay I will highlight the
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important
reasons why
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homework
is an
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important
part of a
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child’s
education.

Firstly
most
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people
believe that
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homework
should not be
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given
as it has the opposite effect of its intended purpose while others say that it is the most
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important
part of a student’s education. While it can
be argued
that giving
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children
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homework
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a lot of
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stress
on the
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child
and
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sometimes
even become something of a burden for them,
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homework
is
still
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important
as it can act as a sort of
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test
for what the
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child
learns in school and
also
better prepares them for when they
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have to
solve real world problems
independently
.

Secondly
,
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homework
also
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helps
the parents of the
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children
by giving them an
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idea
of what their kids are
being taught
in school, helping them to better interact with their
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own
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children
. It
also
gives an opportunity to the
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children
to explore the subjects more
fully
as they wouldn’t have
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enough
time to cover it all in the classroom.
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Homework
also
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helps
the
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child
to develop
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self discipline
and provides them with a sense of responsibility.

In conclusion
, I
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think
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homework
is a
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very
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important
part of a
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child’s
education and shouldn’t
be compromised
,
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but
it should be
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given
in more understandable quantity as too much it can become a burden on the youth and lead to
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stress
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8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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