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Some people believe that primary and secondary education should be provided by the government free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

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We know education has been integrating with human life since the first years of human civilization and always played a critical role in human being growth and prosperity. Whereas providing education has a substantial amount of money given that new education methods, nobody should be deprived of education because of poverty. There are different system of education globally. In some countries, the government provides education at any level free of charge. Germany can be a textbook example in this regard. On the other hand, some countries provide education free of charge only at the primary and secondary level. For instance, in Iran, the tuition fee of primary and secondary education is covered by the government at some public schools. Indeed, more developed countries have adopted better policies in order to grow comprehensive education in the pursuit of a literate society. To illustrate, considering that these countries make the ultimate effort to provide at least free primary and secondary education for their citizen. There are, however, certain point to consider. Providing education free of charge by the government should not be caused literacy of students to reduce and develop class conflict. Given the impression that in Iran, one issue has been proved that most free public schools in terms of efficiency and literacy level to flourish their students are not comparable with the private schools, and from my point of view, this policy of covering tuition fee by the government should be revisioned. By way of explanation, can be carried out an efficient reform to face such problems; in this way, the government allocates surplus funds to families to create a publicly funded education system, and they decide to select which public schools and spend allocated funds for their children. Hence, even public schools try to improve their quality and earn families trust. In brief, the future of children undoubtedly depend on their education and following a certain and efficient curriculum. Any extraordinary talent and abilities should not be killed because of poverty and class inflict. In general, governments shall be adopted a policy that can attend high-quality school at least primary and secondary education. In particular, for less privileged social class.
We know
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education
has been integrating with human life since the
first
years of human civilization and always played a critical role in human being growth and prosperity. Whereas providing
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education
has a substantial amount of money
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given
that new
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education
methods, nobody should
be deprived
of
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education
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because
of poverty.

There are
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different
system of
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education
globally. In
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some
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countries
, the
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government
provides
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education
at any level
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free
of charge. Germany can be a textbook example in this regard.
On the other hand
,
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some
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countries
provide
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education
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free
of charge
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only
at the
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primary
and
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secondary
level.
For instance
, in Iran, the tuition fee of
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primary
and
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secondary
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education
is covered
by the
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government
at
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some
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public
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schools
.
Indeed
, more developed
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countries
have adopted better policies in order to grow comprehensive
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education
in the pursuit of a literate society. To illustrate, considering that these
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countries
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make
the ultimate effort to provide at least
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free
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primary
and
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secondary
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education
for their citizen.

There are,
however
, certain point to consider. Providing
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education
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free
of charge by the
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government
should not
be caused
literacy of students to
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reduce
and develop
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class
conflict.
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Given
the impression that in Iran, one issue has
been proved
that most
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free
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public
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schools
in terms of efficiency and literacy level to flourish their students are not comparable with the private
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schools
, and from my point of view, this policy of covering tuition fee by the
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government
should be
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revisioned
. By way of explanation, can
be carried
out an efficient reform to face such problems; in this way, the
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government
allocates surplus funds to families to create a
publicly
funded
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education
system, and they decide to select which
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public
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schools
and spend allocated funds for their children.
Hence
, even
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public
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schools
try to
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improve
their quality and earn families trust.

In brief
, the future of children
undoubtedly
depend on their
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education
and following a certain and efficient curriculum. Any extraordinary talent and abilities should not
be killed
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because
of poverty and
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class
inflict.
In general
,
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governments
shall
be adopted
a policy that can attend high-quality
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school
at least
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primary
and
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secondary
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education
.
In particular
, for less privileged social
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class
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that primary and secondary education should be provided by the government free of charge.

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4 paragraphs
361 words
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