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the plans show a science park in two different time periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the two cities demonstrate a science park in two different times which is in the year 2008 and today's science park. Ovorall, various faclities have been updated in today's science park similarly some items lost it's preseance. Research and development building have built in northwest part of the park by eliminating grassland. Similarly, It center is replaced by university hub from 2008 to today's park respectively. However, no changes have been found among woodland, business units, offices and road. Cycle path is added beside every road among the science park and a station to the southern part of the park. Strate paths make connection among station innovation centre, car park and cyber security which will reduce the time going from innovation centre to car park. Surprisingly the space of cyber security has increased while the space of car park decreased in today's science park.
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by eliminating grassland.
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added
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IELTS essay the plans show a science park in two different time periods.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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