Education is the, ost important to achieve beter future and nowadays, more than 20 percent of student prefer to take foreign school. Most learners believe there are several problem when studying abroad. However, it also has the positive impact. From my opinion, I agree with this statement.
Students travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. The expect to attain the better job opportunities after graduate ftom this educational intitution. Based on my experience, 3 of 5 friends already accepted in the international companies with high salary adfet dinish from well-known university in the UK. Therefore, by enrolling in the foreign universities help learners easily to get the best job prospect.
On the other and, stay away from home can be challenging for a few students. A lot of differences culture can make the feel homesick and miss theie hometown. For instance, my friend who studied in University of Oxford said that she alwas cried for one months when she fristly come to England. She was difficult to adapted because she needed to do all he household worked by her own. Consenquently, going overseas also has the drawbacks and need some hardwork to adapted.
In conclusion, by learning in other countries has such benefir and obstacle that studets need to consider. Each students require to know the rason and discover the goal to achieve before they choose the exact place to study, especially in the unusual countries.
Education is
the,
ost
important
to achieve
beter
future and nowadays, more than 20 percent of student prefer to take foreign school. Most learners believe there are
several problem
when studying abroad.
However
, it
also
has the
positive
impact. From my opinion, I
agree
with this statement.
Students travel overseas to study at a reputable
universities
. The
expect
to attain the better job opportunities after graduate
ftom
this educational
intitution
. Based on my experience, 3 of 5 friends already
accepted
in the international
companies
with high salary
adfet
dinish
from well-known
university
in the UK.
Therefore
, by enrolling in the foreign
universities
help
learners
easily
to
get
the best job prospect.
On the other and, stay away from home can be challenging for a few students.
A lot of
differences culture can
make
the feel homesick and miss
theie
hometown.
For instance
, my friend who studied in
University
of Oxford said that she
alwas
cried for
one months
when she
fristly
come
to England. She was difficult to adapted
because
she needed to do all
he household
worked by her
own
.
Consenquently
, going overseas
also
has the drawbacks and need
some
hardwork
to adapted.
In conclusion
, by learning in other countries has such
benefir
and obstacle that
studets
need to consider.
Each
students
require to know the
rason
and discover the goal to achieve
before
they choose the exact place to study,
especially
in the unusual countries.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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