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Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Most people think we have too much variety of products nowadays. Affirmately, my personal narrative is very much parallel to the said preposition as I am rationally convinced with this doctrine owing to its pragmatic and fractional strength. In this essay I will discuss there are variety of products are available in shopping mall and having different characteristics which make it difficult to choice product something. The fundamental evidence that validates my stance in the support of there a variety of products the different company offering with different variety as well as characteristic which make it confuse the customer sometimes which product to buy and sometimes its add more confusion when its available on different prices. For instance, very buyer check price and product overall and try to decide to buy or not mostly, people wanted to buy product which are cheap and convenient. Another prevalent benefit associated with the idea there are a lot of variety in shopping mall which is difficult to choice because of shortage of time to spend time on analysis each product waste a lot of time consequently people prefer to make list of product which they want to buy and try to save of valuable time. For example try out every product is a waste of time and have no use of it and its necessary to check every product for no reason. In conclusion, numerous product in market make its difficult to choice and make confusion all the time and number of time we buy product which we have no use of it its totally a wasteful exercise so we must make list of product to save time and money.
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Affirmately
, my personal narrative is
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much parallel to the said preposition as I am
rationally
convinced with this doctrine owing to its pragmatic and fractional strength. In this essay I will discuss there are
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variety
of
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products
are available in shopping mall and having
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different
characteristics which
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make
it difficult to choice
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product
something.

The fundamental evidence that validates my stance in the support of there a
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variety
of
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products
the
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different
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company
offering with
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as well
as characteristic which
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it confuse the customer
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in shopping mall which is difficult to choice
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which they want to
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and try to save of valuable
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is a waste of
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and have no
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of it and its necessary to
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for no reason.

In conclusion
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in market
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difficult to choice and
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confusion all the
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we
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which we have no
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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