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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? Ngk2
The answer is complex since there are a lot of choices in our life and all of them are different kinds. In some cases I would say that it is a good thing to have the ability to choose from a wide variety Take for example gastronomy Every single person has different meals on their list of favourites, Actually if you have a bigger family it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like Therefore I would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping center and choose from a dozen different food types. I can always find something that looks delicious Naturally, there are some people who say that it is against evolution. They claim to say that back in the old days we had a perfect life when technically everybody was farming. I personally disagree with that. I am happy that I could choose a job that fits best to my abilities. I mean no one is the same, why would we want to do the same? Different kinds of universities give us the opportunity to brome who we are meant to be. We have the right to choose However there is one topic where, according to my opinion, we have too many choices This specific area is television. There are hundreds of channels, therefore you can always find something that worth watching Literally you could sit in your sofa the whole day and watch films. I think that people doing less outdoor activities are the results of the many available channels From this point of view I would agree that we have too many choices In conclusion I would say that we can't generally talk about choices since they could be different In tome cases it is good to have many of them while in other areas they could have a negative effect 129
The answer is complex since there are
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a lot of
choices in our life and all of them are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
kinds. In
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some
cases I would say that it is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
thing to have the ability to choose from a wide variety Take
for example
gastronomy Every single person has
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
meals on their list of
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favourites
, Actually if you have a bigger family it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like
Therefore
I would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping center and choose from a dozen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
food types. I can always find something that looks
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
delicious


Naturally
, there are
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who say that it is against evolution. They claim to say that back in the
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old
days we had a perfect life when
technically
everybody was farming. I
personally
disagree with that. I am happy that I could choose a job that fits best to my abilities.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
mean no one is the same, why would we want to do the same?
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Different
kinds of universities give us the opportunity to
Possible spelling mistake found.
brome
who we
are meant
to be. We have the right to
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choose


Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
there is one topic where, according to my opinion, we have too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
choices This specific area is television. There are hundreds of channels,
therefore
you can always find something that worth watching
Literally
you could sit in your sofa the whole day and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
films. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
doing less outdoor activities are the results of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
available channels From this point of view I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that we have too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
choices


In
The comma is probably missing here: "conclusion, I".
conclusion I
would say that we can't
generally
talk about choices since they could be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
In tome cases it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
of them while in other areas they could have a
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negative
effect

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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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