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Many people want service self employed apart from being working for an organisation or company nowadays

Many people want service self employed apart from being working for an organisation or company nowadays 139n

Many people want service self employed apart from being working for an organisation or company nowadays. The reason might be independent in life by selecting lack of self employment, because everyone has family and they need to be give sufficient time to them, but if they are working with any of the corporate company then according company's rules and regulations employees can take only 2 payed leaves apart from the week-off. So

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 want service This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-employed
self employed
 apart from being working for an Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 nowadays. The reason might be independent in life by selecting lack of self employment, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 everyone has Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).family, and
family and
 they need to be give sufficient time to them, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if they are working with any of the corporate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 then according This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and regulations employees can take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 2 Only in a nautical context 'payed' is an acceptable past tense form of 'pay'. Please check!paid
payed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 apart from the week-off. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So