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Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.

Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. Rp9k
Today, climate is changing at alarming rate. Scientists and environmentalists warn about this situation to humankind. Some experts believe that it is the responsibility of the government to cope up with this problem. While some people think that the society can also change their behaviour to towards the environment. I believe that both regime and individuals can solve it this. This essay will explain my viewpoints regarding this statement in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, it is the responsibility of the authority to take some actions towards it. There are many solutions of it. The predominant one is the awareness. Government can spread awareness among people. They can organise a number of seminars and programmes which would help and also tell about the importance of environment and which other factors responsible for its damage. If more people get know about the current situation of the climate change then they will definitely save it for the future. Besides it, the government can make some strict laws that the everyone would follow them seriously. For example, in Delhi which is the capital of India where the government started the odd even vehicle scheme because to reduce air pollution which is increasing day by day. This scheme is followed by every citizen of Delhi. Hence, government can do such things to stop it. On the other hand, at the same time, it is duty of people to join with the government to eradicate this problem. Individuals should change their behaviour because nowadays people prefer more private transportation therefore the harmful gases is produced more which cause global warming. If people commute in public transport then it would reduce the emission of greenhouse gases which control which the temperature of the environment. Therefore people attitude also help cope with it. In conclusion it is clear that both Government and individual should join each other hand to tackle this problem otherwise it can produce more negative impact on the environment as well as the individual life.
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Today
, climate is changing at alarming rate. Scientists and environmentalists warn about this situation to humankind.
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Some
experts believe that it is the responsibility of the
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government
to cope up with this problem.
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While
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some
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people
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think
that the society can
also
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change
their
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behaviour
to towards the
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environment
. I believe that both regime and
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individuals
can solve it this. This essay will
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explain
my viewpoints regarding this statement in upcoming paragraphs. To
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begin
with, it is the responsibility of the authority to take
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some
actions towards it. There are
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many
solutions of it. The predominant one is the awareness.
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Government
can spread awareness among
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people
. They can
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organise
a number of seminars and
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programmes
which would
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help
and
also
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tell
about the importance of
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environment
and which other factors responsible for its damage. If more
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people
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get
know about the
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current
situation of the climate
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change
then they will definitely save it for the future.
Besides
it, the
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government
can
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make
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some
strict laws that
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the everyone
would follow them
seriously
.
For example
, in Delhi which is the capital of India where the
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government
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started
the odd even vehicle scheme
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because
to
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reduce
air pollution which is increasing day by day. This scheme
is followed
by every citizen of Delhi.
Hence
,
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government
can do such things to
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stop
it.
On the other hand
, at the same time, it is duty of
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people
to
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join
with the
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government
to eradicate this problem.
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Individuals
should
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change
their
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behaviour
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because
nowadays
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people
prefer more private transportation
therefore
the harmful gases
is produced
more which cause global warming. If
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people
commute in public transport then it would
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reduce
the emission of greenhouse gases which control which the temperature of the
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environment
.
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Therefore
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people
attitude
also
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help
cope with it. In
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conclusion it
is
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clear
that both
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Government
and
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individual
should
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join
each other hand to tackle this problem
otherwise
it can produce more
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negative
impact on the
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environment
as well
as the
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individual
life.
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IELTS essay Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
331 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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