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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices Brqa
Change is good as long as its is circumspect with the invent of 21st century technology has leaped to a level was unimaginable. This is reason every person in this world have a lot of choices related to study, food and clothes so on. Therefore I am also agree with this recommendation idea for several aspects which I elaborate in further paragraphs with proper evidence. Fistly it can not be denied that present days every individual have choices related to food because of development 2 decades ago we saw in family prepar one type of food and family members not another choice without eat it but, nowadays for instance if person don't wat to eat homemade food so he vist online sits like Amazon, cake and bake etc. Apart from this they not only order online but also go to restaurants and eat various meals accordingly to their choice.
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of 21st century technology has leaped to a level was unimaginable. This is reason every person in this world have
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choices
related to study,
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food
and clothes
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agree
with this recommendation
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for several aspects which I elaborate in
further
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it can not
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that present days every individual have
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choices
related to
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food
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because
of development 2 decades ago we
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saw
in family
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one type of
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food
and family members not another
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choice
without eat it
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but
, nowadays
for instance
if person don'
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t wat
to eat homemade
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food
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he
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vist
online sits like Amazon, cake and bake etc. Apart from this they not
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order online
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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