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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday

Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday NpoW
There is a notion that telecommuting is a better as well as effective working culture. in my point of view working from home trend brings more reports than drawbacks. It cannot be denied that into it charges in term of employees and employers suffer as a personal and professional life of the professionals is mixed thereby they confront horrible hindrance which are the outcomes of an imbalanced personal and professional life it has been observed that several such workers become the victim of stress leading to depression according to our search although it is true that a imbalance in personal and professional life greatest disine Greens conference it help to eradicate travelling and so many other experience as well as handles hurdles for example the employees and the employee's save sufficient time and money for their personal life when they need to travel and to establish and infrastructure have not need for
There is a notion that telecommuting is a better
as well
as effective working culture.
in
my point of view working from home trend brings more reports than drawbacks. It cannot
be denied
that into it charges in term of employees and employers suffer as a
personal
and
professional
life
of the
professionals
is mixed
thereby they confront horrible hindrance which are the outcomes of an imbalanced
personal
and
professional
life
it has
been observed
that several such workers become the victim of
stress
leading to depression according to our search although it is true that
a
imbalance in
personal
and
professional
life
greatest
disine
Greens conference it
help
to eradicate travelling and
so
many other experience
as well
as
handles
hurdles
for example
the employees and the employee's
save
sufficient time and money for their
personal
life
when they need to travel and to establish and infrastructure have not
need
for
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IELTS essay Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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