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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday

Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday NpoW
There is a notion that telecommuting is a better as well as effective working culture. in my point of view working from home trend brings more reports than drawbacks. It cannot be denied that into it charges in term of employees and employers suffer as a personal and professional life of the professionals is mixed thereby they confront horrible hindrance which are the outcomes of an imbalanced personal and professional life it has been observed that several such workers become the victim of stress leading to depression according to our search although it is true that a imbalance in personal and professional life greatest disine Greens conference it help to eradicate travelling and so many other experience as well as handles hurdles for example the employees and the employee's save sufficient time and money for their personal life when they need to travel and to establish and infrastructure have not need for
There is a notion that telecommuting is a better
as well
as effective working culture.
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in
my point of view working from home trend brings more reports than drawbacks. It cannot
be denied
that into it charges in term of employees and employers suffer as a
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personal
and
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professional
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life
of the
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professionals
is mixed
thereby they confront horrible hindrance which are the outcomes of an imbalanced
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personal
and
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professional
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life
it has
been observed
that several such workers become the victim of
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stress
leading to depression according to our search although it is true that
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a
imbalance in
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personal
and
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professional
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life
greatest
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Greens conference it
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help
to eradicate travelling and
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many other experience
as well
as
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handles
hurdles
for example
the employees and the employee's
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sufficient time and money for their
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personal
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life
when they need to travel and to establish and infrastructure have not
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IELTS essay Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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