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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

First, in this modern era; people has to many choices in their day to day life style. In span of time they can get the things what they want; and they can change there choice immediately we they dislike it. I believe that in this days people has their own choice to what to choose and what not to choose; they know ever well when there is plenty of options available in the market. Person can choose according to their wellness; Here they can look after the products through rating and the quality nd quantity of there purchase item. While coming to online shopping they can go through sufficient products by their own wish they can purchase their suitable product if they dislike it after purchasing; they can exchange it later. In a family when it comes to television they can look after several channels while comparing to cinema; that's why many people prefer television that going to movie theatre; Here and itself one must not waste much money by spending outside the home

First
, in this modern era; This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If ‘people’ is plural here, don’t use the third-person singular verb.have
has
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 choices in their It appears that two hyphens are missing.day-to-day
day to day
This noun is normally spelled as one word.lifestyle
life style
. In span of time they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the things what they want; and they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 there choice immediately we they dislike it. I believe that in It seems that a possessive apostrophe is missing.this day'sthese days
this days
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If ‘people’ is plural here, don’t use the third-person singular verb.have
has
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 choice to what to choose and what not to choose; they know ever well when there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of options available in the market. Person can choose according to their wellness; Here they can look after the products through rating and the quality Possible spelling mistake found.NDNdandendnoCD
nd
 quantity of there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 item. While coming to online shopping they can go through sufficient products by their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 wish they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 their suitable product if they dislike it after purchasing; they can exchange it later. In a family when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to television they can look after several channels while comparing to cinema; that's why This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 prefer television that going to movie Possible spelling mistake. ‘theatre’ is British English.theater
theatre
; Here and itself one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 not waste much money by spending outside the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.home.home!home?home:home,home;
home