Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT

SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. WITH THE STATEMENT 2aJrX
In the scientific developed century meantime people have overwhelming opportunities to shows there skills and creatively. I greatfully agree that point because the development of the internet have been give a great impact nowadays and future technology development. It's is truthfull that the development of communication and stroge gives a lots of information within seconds, at the later period thers no much reliable information found within short period. But the 21st century people's easily found the correct information within a little bit time through help internet. ‌In the modern era there are lots of opportunities are overwhelming developed because the information transfer speeds improves unlimited for example past two decades ago the data transfer time is taken almost two more days in that time thay used paper and some objects to transfer the data, but in the high-tech era the data bits are transmitted within a second through the help of internet. ‌ Atlast I conclude that the lots of choices are there to choose the carrier with their own way of interest
In the scientific developed century meantime
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have overwhelming opportunities to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and
creatively
. I
Possible spelling mistake found.
greatfully
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that point
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the development of the internet have been give a great impact nowadays and future technology development.

Did you mean "It is"?
It's is
Possible spelling mistake found.
truthfull
that the development of communication and
Possible spelling mistake found.
stroge
gives
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?
a lots
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
within seconds, at the later period
Possible spelling mistake found.
thers
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
much reliable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
found within short period.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the 21st century
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's
easily
found the correct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
within a
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
time through
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
internet.

‌In the modern era there are lots of opportunities are overwhelming developed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
transfer speeds
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
unlimited
for example
past two decades ago the data transfer time
is taken
almost two more days in that time
Possible spelling mistake found.
thay
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
paper and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
objects to transfer the data,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in the high-tech era the data bits
are transmitted
within a second through the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of internet.

‌

Possible spelling mistake found.
Atlast
I conclude that the lots of choices are there to choose the carrier with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
way of interest

IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. WITH THE STATEMENT

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • descirbe an interesting person you have met
    There are different types of people live in the world together and they are featured with diversified characters. I have met an interesting person, his name Alex. Alex is a Canadian and he's living in Ho Chi Minh city, I met him at Dat Lat when I went to it with my family. The things make Alex speca...
  • Many famous people are treated unfairly by the media. Should they be given more privacy?
    In this day and age, someone’s popularity is easily known to everyone due to the explosion of mass media. This entails some personal demerits such as their private life. I agree with those who believe that renowned people should be enjoyed their own peace. Admittedly, the momentary reputation alway...
  • Do you agree that nowadays only food is responsible for healthily life style
    From last few decades there have been enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by diet plan. Recent years have witnessed much discussion much revolving around the issue that some people believe that nowadays eating habits of people are responsible for unhealthily life style. To my way...
  • he world should have only one goverment rather than a national government for each country. —> your opinion: Do advanatges outweigh disadvantages.
    In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that the world solely ought to have one government rather than a national one per country. In my opinion, I totally suppose that the drawbacks are more than the benefits because of several reasons. Firstly, if ...
  • write a paragraph about 120-150 words about benefits of city life
    benefits of city life have been hotly discussed topic. First of all, students in the city will have good education. It cannot be dennied that in the city have many qualified teachers so students can broaden the knowledges easily. More interestingly in urrban hass many national schools; therefore, st...
  • HOLIDAY REVIEW WITH FAMILY ESSAY
    Recently, my family and I went on holiday in Cameron Highland, Pahang. We vacationed for 2 days and 1 night. We went to Cameron Highlands by car. After taking almost 4 hours, we finally arrived in Cameron Highlands. My family and I stayed at Copthorne Cameron Highlands. The hotel has a very spaciou...





Get more results for topic:
  • SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS WE HAVE TOO MANY CHOICES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT