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There are different types of people live in the world together and they are featured with diversified characters. I have met an interesting person, his name Alex. Alex is a Canadian and he's living in Ho Chi Minh city, I met him at Dat Lat when I went to it with my family. The things make Alex specail that he does the things in different ways than we do. He is not funny at all but you will be amazed at his activities. He is adventurous and active. I found Alex interesting because his in-depth knowledge of latest technology and we can discuss about computers, A. l and much more things about technology.
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types of
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people
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in the world
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together and
they
are featured
with diversified characters. I have met an interesting person, his name Alex. Alex is a
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Canadian and
he's living in
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Ho Chi Minh city
, I met him at
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Dat
Lat when I went to it with my family. The things
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make
Alex
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specail
that he does the things in
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different
ways than we do. He is not
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funny
at all
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but
you will
be amazed
at his activities. He is adventurous and active. I found Alex interesting
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because
his in-depth knowledge of
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latest
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technology and
we can
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discuss about computers
, A. l and much more things about technology.

IELTS essay descirbe an interesting person you have met

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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