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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. Njdm
We live in a society where a few people still believe males are more superior than females whereas, on the other hand large number of mankind have strongly belief that everyone is equal in the community and I can proudly say, I am one among them. At this present, women are successful as equal as men in all professional and non-professional sectors, their contribution in the civilization unavoidable. In this 21st century, it is more evident that the number of women work in corporate companies are identical to men, moreover, We could see numerous young entrepreneur in this century. For example, during my campus interview, compared to boys, girls got more job offer in that moment. Girls have high potential, also dedicated to the work they do. As a result, they are inevitable in this community. Furthermore, women are twin in men in space science, as well as in the politics. Kalpana Chawla, likewise, Jayalalitha are the two best example to prove the equality, besides their stories inspired, moreover, motivated a lot of females live in countryside. As a result the number of women in professional jobs will be increasing in the up-coming years. To conclude, in my perspective, the amount of women getting placed in carrier is parallelly same to the men, in addition they are more victorious and unpreventable in the modern era.
We
live
in a society where a few
people
still
believe males are
more superior than
females whereas,
on the other hand
large number of mankind have
strongly
belief that everyone is equal in the community and I can
proudly
say, I am one among them. At this present,
women
are successful as equal as
men
in all professional and non-professional sectors, their contribution in the civilization unavoidable.

In this 21st century, it is more evident that the number of
women
work in corporate
companies
are identical to
men
,
moreover
, We could
see
numerous young entrepreneur in this century.
For example
, during my campus interview, compared to boys, girls
got
more job offer
in that moment
. Girls have high potential,
also
dedicated to the work they do.
As a result
, they are inevitable in this community.

Furthermore
,
women
are twin in
men
in space science,
as well
as in the politics.
Kalpana
Chawla
,
likewise
,
Jayalalitha
are the two best example to prove the equality,
besides
their stories inspired,
moreover
, motivated
a lot of
females
live
in countryside.
As
a result the number of
women
in professional jobs will be increasing in the up-coming years.

To conclude
, in my perspective, the amount of
women
getting placed in carrier is
parallelly
same to the
men
,
in addition
they are more victorious and unpreventable in the modern era.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

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