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some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Other believe that it it getting easier

some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Other believe that it it getting easier 8denr
There are several controversies over the problem of settling in metropolises. While some critics argue that living in big cities has been a challenge, others state that urban lives bring more comforts. In my opinion, I believe that city life is becoming easier in several cases because of adequate education opportunities, as well as their modern facilities. On the one hand, city inhabitants may face a variety of challenges. The first issue might be a greater cost of living in cities compared to villages or other small towns, because urban residents may have to pay more for transportation or household costs. Second, excessive population density in cities may lead to overcrowding, as well as a lack of open green spaces. Followed by tons of daily emissions discharged from families, vehicles, and metropolitan factories, the quality of air and water may deteriorate, putting citizens' health at risk. On the other hand, many people believe that settling in big cities brings a myriad of comforts. Initializing with access to high-quality educational offers, well-known colleges, foreign schools, and other high-quality educational facilities centered on metropolitan areas provide advantages to city residents in terms of improved educational options and knowledge expansion. Moreover, thanks to the government's investments in public transportation systems such as bus or street conditions, metropolitan dwellers' mobility can be enhanced. Furthermore, urban residents can enrich their spiritual lives or relax by going to the movie theater, or by visiting an amusement park. From my perspective, although some aspects of city life are not ideal, such as pollution and cost of living, I would still choose to settle in a metropolis. Now that, being able to reach higher-level education and having fun at cinemas makes citizens expand their knowledge and upgrade their living conditions. To sum up, supporters of living in cities state that it will bring tons of benefits to city inhabitants in terms of educational offers, modern facilities and ways of amusement, while opponents think that people will face various problems because of life expedition, as well as air and water pollution.
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critics argue that
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in
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big
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has been a challenge, others state that urban
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bring more comforts. In my opinion, I believe that city life is becoming easier in several cases
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because
of adequate education opportunities,
as well
as their modern facilities.

On the one hand, city inhabitants may face a variety of challenges. The
first
issue might be a greater cost of
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living
in
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cities
compared to villages or
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other
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small
towns,
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because
urban residents may
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have to
pay more for transportation or household costs. Second, excessive population density in
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cities
may lead to overcrowding,
as well
as a lack of open green spaces. Followed by tons of daily emissions discharged from families, vehicles, and metropolitan factories, the quality of air and water may deteriorate, putting citizens' health at
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risk
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On the
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hand,
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believe that settling in
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big
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cities
brings a myriad of comforts. Initializing with access to high-quality
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educational
offers, well-known colleges, foreign schools, and
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high-quality
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educational
facilities centered on metropolitan areas provide advantages to city residents in terms of
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improved
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options and knowledge expansion.
Moreover
, thanks to the
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government
's investments in public transportation systems such as bus or street conditions, metropolitan dwellers' mobility can
be enhanced
.
Furthermore
, urban residents can enrich their spiritual
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lives
or relax by going to the movie theater, or by visiting an amusement park.

From my perspective, although
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some
aspects of city life are not ideal, such as pollution and cost of
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, I would
still
choose to settle in a metropolis.
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Now
that, being able to reach higher-level education and having fun at cinemas
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makes
citizens expand their knowledge and upgrade their
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living
conditions.

To sum up, supporters of
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in
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cities
state that it will bring tons of benefits to city inhabitants in terms of
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educational
offers, modern facilities and ways of amusement, while opponents
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think
that
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will face various problems
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of life expedition,
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as air and water pollution.
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IELTS essay some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Other believe that it it getting easier

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5 paragraphs
342 words
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