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Some people believe that libraries are waste of resources and computer should replace them . discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In this revolutionary world, sharing knowledge is of the utmost priority. While many centralized libraries provide ample scope for reading, youngsters are opting for digital books as well. Even though, computers are proving undoubtedly beneficial, they can not be the only alternative to traditional libraries. Many social sites now provide digital or E-books. Youngsters find it, as a fascinating experience of reading. They can read a book without compromising on time. Many books, magazines are available at a single download. Someone should not even worry about physically storing the book. In fact, once the reading done; immediately, the book can be sent to trash files. You don't need to be always checking on a date for book return. Some ebooks are available with the audio version, so one can easily ‘hear’ the book on Kinder. Although, there are numerous benefits of computers and ebooks, I am a strong supporter of libraries. Many libraries are located centrally and what attracts me is their architecture. The organizational skills of the employees in the library are incredible. You can peacefully read a variety of novels, books, references, periodicals which may not be available on computers. Reading book can be less tiring to eyes as it is a device-free reading, also decrease the risks of other ophthalmologic disorders. Kids can read and enjoy colorful books in the library and they can borrow the book at home so that they don't get distracted by gaming sites online.
In this revolutionary world, sharing knowledge is of the utmost priority. While
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many
centralized libraries provide ample scope for
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reading
, youngsters are opting for digital
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books
as well
.
Even though
, computers are proving
undoubtedly
beneficial, they can not be the
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only
alternative to traditional libraries.

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Many
social sites
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now
provide digital or E-books. Youngsters find it, as a fascinating experience of
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reading
. They can read a
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book
without compromising on time.
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Many
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books
, magazines are available at a single download. Someone should not even worry about
physically
storing the
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book
. In fact, once the
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reading
done; immediately, the
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book
can be
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sent
to trash files. You don't need to be always checking on a date for
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book
return.
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Some
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ebooks
are available with the audio version,
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so
one can
easily
‘hear’ the
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book
on Kinder.

Although, there are numerous benefits of computers and
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ebooks
, I am a strong supporter of libraries.
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Many
libraries
are located
centrally
and what attracts me is their architecture. The organizational
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skills
of the employees in the library are incredible. You can
peacefully
read a variety of novels,
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books
, references, periodicals which may not be available on computers.
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Reading
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book
can be less tiring to eyes as it is a device-free
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reading
,
also
decrease the
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risks
of other
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ophthalmologic
disorders. Kids can read and enjoy colorful
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books
in the
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library and
they can borrow the
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book
at home
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so
that they don't
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get
distracted by gaming sites online.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that libraries are waste of resources and computer should replace them.

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242 words
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