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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of parents to teach their children about waste recycling Where are sometimes one of the opinion that schools can do better this regard discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of parents to teach their children about waste recycling Where are sometimes one of the opinion that schools can do better this regard discuss both views and give your opinion dkJlX
Nowadays part of globalisation large number of waste and waste material present in the world H may Recycle or non cycle. Most of the children not aware of the system. Somebody thinking education for the recycle it's teachers responsibility others opinion parents are the one responsible person. I will explore both side of the statement and I will give my opinion before conclusion. Firstly, School management can give lot of lessons of the particular topics and keep will improve their knowledge and development. Beginning of the primary schools they are started to hear recycle. Like what is the waist and after to reuse this waste for products. Waste like home waste, water bottles, milk covers and newspapers etc: Students are more accepted teachers advice than parent. Secondly, most of the class lesson has recycle but less practical only. Teachers can present more Visual videos or hand creativity about the topic. On the other hand parents can teach them how to reuse in the waste of the house how can disposed and later how to become using for like gardening and cooking gas. Now a days house has discomposer and biogas system with vegetable waste for cows dung. Children can see this procedure how waste become cooking gas. This type discomposation, enhance their knowledge and development. My opinion teachers can educate more than parents to the school. Their children can learn more objective how to recycle. Most of the parents little much awareness about this. In conclusion, recycle is a good waste management but Awareness of this little much only. Teachers and parents can teach their student this is their responsibility. help the children to two more in the future
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globalisation
large number of
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waste
and
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waste
material present in the world H may
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Recycle
or non cycle. Most of the
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children
not aware of the system. Somebody thinking education for the
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recycle
it's
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teachers
responsibility others opinion
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parents
are the one responsible person. I will explore both side of the statement and I will give my opinion
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before
conclusion.

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, School management can give
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improve
their knowledge and development. Beginning of the primary schools they are
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started
to hear
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recycle
. Like what is the waist and after to reuse this
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waste
for products.
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Waste
like home
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waste
, water bottles, milk covers and newspapers etc:

Students are more
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accepted
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teachers
advice than parent.

Secondly
, most of the
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class
lesson has
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recycle
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less practical
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only
.
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Teachers
can present more Visual videos or hand creativity about the topic.
On the other hand
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parents
can teach them how to reuse in the
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waste
of the
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house
how can disposed and later how to become using for like gardening and cooking gas.
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Now a days
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house
has
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discomposer
and biogas system with vegetable
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waste
for cows dung.
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Children
can
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see
this procedure how
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waste
become cooking gas. This type
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discomposation
, enhance their knowledge and development.

My opinion
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teachers
can educate more than
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parents
to the school. Their
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children
can learn more objective how to
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recycle
. Most of the
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parents
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little
much awareness about this.

In conclusion
,
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recycle
is a
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good
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waste
management
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but
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much
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and
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parents
can teach their student this is their responsibility.
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help
the
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children
to two more in the
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future
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is the responsibility of parents to teach their children about waste recycling Where are sometimes one of the opinion that schools can do better this regard discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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