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Describe a time when you did shopping in a street market

Describe a time when you did shopping in a street market A3mll
I went to the street market a lot and did a lot of shopping there. The name of street market is Urgut and it is a large. It is located in Urgut district of Samarkand region. There are lots of different goods there. There you can find all things you want. For example, there are many clothes and they are cheap much than other street markets and most shops. That is why I often go to the there for shopping. Last time I went there with my friends at this time last year. We bought some summer dresses there. there was many quality clothes. I could get all them but I didn't have enough money.
I went to the street market a lot and did
a lot of
shopping there. The name of street market is
Urgut
and it is a large. It
is located
in
Urgut
district of Samarkand region. There are lots of
different
goods
there. There you can find all things you want.
For example
, there are
many
clothes and
they are
cheap
much
than other street markets and most shops.
That is
why I
often
go to the there for shopping. Last time I went there with my friends at this time last year. We
bought
some
summer dresses there.
there
was
many
quality clothes. I could
get
all them
but
I didn't have
enough
money.
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you did shopping in a street market

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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