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Travel to another country in the future

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as
a matter of clarification if I
barely
talk about it over a town or city regarded as my cup of tea after top of my head I
would definitely apps
for the van which
cuz
this is my dream
house and
he can slide it under Alliance a majority of individuals saying that the
Dreamhouse
would be a
Ramblin
well decorated
as well
as stylish Penthouse with the ladies in a quiet residential area my dream
house
is always been somewhere on a hillside overlooking a
beautiful
lady can I control me and I know it's Terry if my memory doesn't go to complete blank be
but
they cannot recall that every city has a lot to offer
but
if I had any
Bonne
chance to choose Beyond any. My options would be serious this is the city of which I'm
desperately
in
love
with everything she does is a delightful City situated in the southwest of Iran this is the birthplace and resting place of the great person to Italian
houses
in a row what is a City full of bows culture and history you know what traveling appears to be the prices of opportunity which promotes cross-cultural understanding
so
the more I stand large hands of time and traveling the more I find out devoting my time to traveling to Shiraz gives me a chance of living in a world of my
own
but
I meant to say is that every are millions of
people
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IELTS essay Travel to another country in the future

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
247 words
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