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some people believe that it is good to share as much much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

some people believe that it is good to share as much much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. YWyV
In the salad days of millennium, The society is polarised in two groups almost equally regarding the notion that the best knowledge should be transfer as much as possible in research, study world and the business and some information has significant value are shared with friendly. different people have their distinct mindset the following paragraph would shed lights on both the approaches before making final note. To commence with the first notion, there are muraid thing to be shared in ti's favour. First and foremost, economic growth by business sector. as a result by sharing good information to the new starters in business world they can improve their sales. Secondly, developing new things. consequently, the knowledge can be exchanged to have better results in new inventions by scientific researchers. Shifting towards the second school of though, military has useful information. hence the army people send most significant message to ensure their security levels at the border of the country. it often leads to increase the strength of any country in the world. Havind discussed arguments and counters argument, i would like to infer that i believe some of the knowledge is highly useful to transfer with friendly nature. to justify my state of mind, there is an instance of on Indian organisations. Hammering the last nail, I personally fell that share information if it has too much of valuable content.
In the salad days of millennium, The society is
polarised
in two groups almost
equally
regarding the notion that the best knowledge should be transfer as much as possible in research, study world and the business and
some
information
has significant value
are shared
with friendly.
different
people
have their distinct mindset the following paragraph would shed lights on both the approaches
before
making final note.

To commence with the
first
notion, there are
muraid
thing
to
be shared
in ti's
favour
.
First
and foremost, economic growth by business sector.
as
a result by sharing
good
information
to the new starters in business world they can
improve
their sales.
Secondly
, developing new things.
consequently
, the knowledge can
be exchanged
to have better results in new inventions by scientific researchers.

Shifting towards the second school of though, military has useful
information
.
hence
the army
people
send
most significant message to ensure their security levels at the border of the country.
it
often
leads to increase the strength of any country in the world.
Havind
discussed arguments and counters argument,
i
would like to infer that
i
believe
some of the
knowledge is
highly
useful to transfer with friendly nature.
to
justify my state of mind, there is an instance of on Indian
organisations
.

Hammering the last nail, I
personally
fell that share
information
if it has too much of valuable content.
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IELTS essay some people believe that it is good to share as much much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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