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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both the views and give your opinions.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. aNlw
A number of people agree that it is best to accept the bad circumstances for instance unsatisfactory job or shortage of money while others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. To begin with, mostly people believe that it is better to agree with the bad situation like jobs in which they are not happy or monetary issues. It is specially better to accept these situation so that any person can balance and figure out that exactly what problems cause this situation. For instance, if a person struggling with monetory issues, then he/she should accept it by which he/she can find out the solutions to improve that phase. Sometimes people think that if they accept the situation then, it can harm their self respect or age. Additionally, others argue that it is better to make efforts to improve such circumstances. For instance, if a person is facing issue in their job and if they are not happy with salary package or services which are provided by organisation then they should try to find another job which will relevant to them and suitable with their choices and needs. Overall, in my opinion, it is beneficial to accept the bad situation so that the person can make strategies to overcome from it. If any person accept the worst situation so that the person can make strategies to overcome from it. If any person accept the situation then he/she should make efforts and find solutions to turn that situation from bad to good. It helps people to get rid from problems and to change the situation.
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accept
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bad
circumstances
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unsatisfactory
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job
or shortage of money while others argue that it is
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better
to
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improve
such situations.

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people
believe that it is
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agree
with the
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bad
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like
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jobs
in which they are not happy or monetary issues. It is
specially
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better
to
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accept
these
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situation
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so
that any
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person
can balance and figure out that exactly what problems cause this
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situation
.
For instance
, if a
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person
struggling with
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monetory
issues, then he/she should
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accept
it by which he/she can find out the solutions to
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improve
that phase.
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people
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think
that if they
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accept
the
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situation
then, it can harm their
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self respect
or age.

Additionally
, others argue that it is
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better
to
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make
efforts to
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improve
such circumstances.
For instance
, if a
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person
is facing issue in their
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job
and if they are not happy with salary package or services which
are provided
by
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organisation
then they should try to find another
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job
which will relevant to them and suitable with their choices and needs.

Overall
, in my opinion, it is beneficial to
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accept
the
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bad
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situation
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so
that the
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person
can
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make
strategies to overcome from it. If any
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person
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accept
the worst
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situation
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so
that the
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person
can
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make
strategies to overcome from it. If any
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person
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accept
the
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situation
then he/she should
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make
efforts and find solutions to turn that
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situation
from
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bad
to
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good
. It
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helps
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people
to
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get
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rid from
problems and to
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change
the
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situation
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
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