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Most of our information comes from the internet nowadays.some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect.Do you agree or disagree?

Most of our information comes from the internet nowadays. some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Gj9o
It is true that nowadays, internet is the biggest source, where people gain various kind of knowledge. Some people of society deem that sometimes information that is available on the internet is unauthentic. I agree with this notion and this essay will intends to articulate this notion before reaching the plausible conclusion. On the one hand, internet has become a cardinal part in human's life, it provide the different knowledge to every needful person. Firstly, in today's competitive era, massive people are using the internet for explore their ideas. Besides this, it is beneficial for pupils to improve their learning skills as well as develop their academic performance. Secondly, there are ample of organisation, who upload genuine information on internet owing to this, correct data is taken by people. Moreover, these days individuals are becoming aware about the incorrect knowledge, which sometimes spead by those people who provoke masses by providing wrong data. Due to awareness masses collect only right data. Therefore, internet services provide instant services to people as they can take any information at any time. On the other hand, there are a lot of information on internet which is not original and these type of data become a big threat on people like, financial issue. Futhermore, internet is a big cause of cybercrime in society. Many bad people can misuse the other people's account and make the fake email address which is harmful for some innocent individuals. Hence, sometimes incorrect information is becoming a big hazard for people. Agglomerating all the facts in mind, I conclude that most of the information on the internet is better. With the rise of people's awarenes of its accuracy people will achive correct data with the help of internet.
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people
of society deem that
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information
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agree
with this notion and this essay will intends to articulate this notion
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before
reaching the plausible conclusion.

On the one hand, internet has become a cardinal part in human's life, it
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provide
the
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different
knowledge to every needful person.
Firstly
, in
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today
's competitive era, massive
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people
are using the internet for explore their
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ideas
.
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this, it is beneficial for pupils to
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improve
their learning
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skills
as well
as develop their academic performance.
Secondly
, there are ample of
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organisation
, who upload genuine
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information
on internet owing to this, correct
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data
is taken
by
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people
.
Moreover
, these days individuals are becoming aware about the incorrect knowledge, which
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sometimes
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by those
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who provoke masses by providing
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wrong
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data
. Due to awareness masses collect
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only
right
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data
.
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, internet services provide instant services to
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people
as they can take any
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information
at any time.

On the other hand
, there are
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information
on internet which is not original and these type of
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data
become a
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big
threat on
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people
like, financial issue.
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cause of cybercrime in society.
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can misuse the other
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's account and
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the fake email address which is harmful for
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some
innocent individuals.
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,
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incorrect
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information
is becoming a
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big
hazard for
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people
.

Agglomerating all the facts in mind, I conclude that most of the
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information
on the internet is better. With the rise of
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people
's
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awarenes
of its accuracy
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people
will
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correct
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data
with the
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help
of internet.
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IELTS essay Most of our information comes from the internet nowadays. some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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