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Some people believe that information available in the internet will end the era of newspapers and magazines. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion with examples.

Some people believe that information available in the internet will end the era of newspapers and magazines. Give your opinion with examples. AjA0e
AS TECHNOLGY EXPANDS, THERE WILL THE LATEST METHODS ARISE THAT HELP PEOPLE TO ALLOW EFFORTLESS LIVELIHOOD. CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT INNOVATION IN THE INTERNET FACILITY WOULD HAVE DETRIMENTAL IMPACT ON THE PHYSICAL pattern OF NEWSPAPER AND MAGAZINES. THIS ESSAY WILL 50% CONCIUR WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO SEVERAL HUMAN FACTS NAMELY THE HABIT OF READING IT. THEREFOR, THIS ESSAY WILL DISUCSS THE REASON BEHIND SUCH THINKING AND SECONDLY WHY THIS ESSAY ONLY SUPPORT THE NOTION PARTIALLY. THE MOST OF THE YOUTH PREFFERD THE METHOD OF KNOWING THE INFORMATION ON ANY TOPICS THAT DECLINEN THEIR EFFORT AND TIME. AND, THE ONLINE NEWSPAPER FACILITY IS FULLY CAPABLE TO PROVIDE SO. THAT IS WHY SOME FOLKS THINK THAT PHYSICAL READING WILL BE TERMINATED IN THE UPCOMING YEARS. FOR EXAMPLE, ACCORDING TO THE READERS DATA, 80% OF THE ADOLESCENCE READ ANY MAGAZINE OR NEWS THROUGH INTERNET RATHER THAN PHYSICAL pattern. IN CONTRAST, THE OLDER GENERATION HAVE A HABIT OF DOING THE DAILY CHORE THAT USE THE SOME ENERGY TO KEPP THE HEALTH FIT AND FINE. THIS WILL ALLOW THEM TO LIVE DISEASE FREE LIFE CONSEQUENTLY, THE ACTIVITIES ACTIVATES THE VARIOUS BODY PART THAT INHIBIT THE DISEASE FORMATION. AS A RESULT THEY HAVE LONG LIFE SPAN. FOR INSTANCE, ACCORDING TO THE UK SURVEY, INDIAN GENERALTION LIVE MUCH LONGER THAN ANY OTHER CONTINET'S CIVILIANS DUE TO DOING THINGS BY OWN THAN DEPENDING ON THE TECHNOLOGY. IN MY OPINION, I DO NOT THINK THAT THERE WILL BE NO PHYSICAL FORM OF NEWSPAPER AND MAGAZINES IN THE WORLD AS MANY OLDER AGE PEOPLE STILL SEARCH FOR THE HINGS THAT BE AN ASSET TO MAKE BUSY THEMSELVES. IN CONCLUSION, NEWSPAER AND MAGAZINES ARE INDEED A PART OF EVERYONE'S DAILY LIFE. HENCE, THERE WILL BE BOTH THE FORM OF NEWSPAPERS AND MAGAZINES WILL BE THERE AS LONG AS OLDER GENERATION NOT CHANGING THIER HABITS OF PREFFERING PHYSICAL FORM OF IT.
AS
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TECHNOLGY
EXPANDS, THERE WILL THE LATEST METHODS ARISE THAT
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HELP
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PEOPLE
TO
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ALLOW
EFFORTLESS LIVELIHOOD. CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT INNOVATION IN THE INTERNET FACILITY WOULD HAVE DETRIMENTAL IMPACT ON THE
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PHYSICAL
pattern OF
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NEWSPAPER
AND
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MAGAZINES
. THIS ESSAY WILL 50%
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CONCIUR
WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO SEVERAL HUMAN FACTS
NAMELY
THE HABIT OF READING IT. THEREFOR, THIS ESSAY WILL
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DISUCSS
THE REASON BEHIND SUCH THINKING AND
SECONDLY
WHY THIS ESSAY
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ONLY
SUPPORT THE NOTION
PARTIALLY
.

THE MOST OF THE YOUTH
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PREFFERD
THE METHOD OF KNOWING THE INFORMATION ON ANY TOPICS THAT
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DECLINEN
THEIR EFFORT AND TIME. AND, THE ONLINE
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NEWSPAPER
FACILITY IS
FULLY
CAPABLE TO PROVIDE
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SO
.
THAT IS
WHY
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SOME
FOLKS
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THINK
THAT
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PHYSICAL
READING WILL
BE TERMINATED
IN THE UPCOMING YEARS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, ACCORDING TO THE READERS DATA, 80% OF THE ADOLESCENCE READ ANY
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MAGAZINE
OR NEWS THROUGH INTERNET
RATHER
THAN
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PHYSICAL
pattern.

IN CONTRAST
, THE OLDER GENERATION HAVE A HABIT OF DOING THE DAILY CHORE THAT
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USE
THE
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SOME
ENERGY TO
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KEPP
THE HEALTH FIT AND FINE. THIS WILL
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ALLOW
THEM TO
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LIVE
DISEASE FREE LIFE
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE ACTIVITIES ACTIVATES THE VARIOUS BODY PART THAT INHIBIT THE DISEASE FORMATION.
AS A RESULT
THEY HAVE LONG LIFE SPAN.
FOR INSTANCE
, ACCORDING TO THE UK SURVEY, INDIAN
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GENERALTION
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LIVE
MUCH LONGER THAN ANY OTHER
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CONTINET
'S CIVILIANS DUE TO DOING THINGS BY
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OWN
THAN DEPENDING ON THE TECHNOLOGY.

IN MY OPINION, I DO NOT
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THINK
THAT THERE WILL BE NO
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PHYSICAL
FORM OF
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NEWSPAPER
AND
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MAGAZINES
IN THE WORLD AS
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MANY
OLDER AGE
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PEOPLE
STILL
SEARCH FOR THE HINGS THAT BE AN ASSET TO
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MAKE
BUSY THEMSELVES.

IN CONCLUSION
,
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NEWSPAER
AND
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MAGAZINES
ARE
INDEED
A PART OF EVERYONE'S DAILY LIFE.
HENCE
, THERE WILL BE BOTH THE FORM OF
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NEWSPAPERS
AND
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MAGAZINES
WILL BE THERE AS LONG AS OLDER GENERATION NOT CHANGING
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THIER
HABITS OF
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PREFFERING
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IELTS essay Some people believe that information available in the internet will end the era of newspapers and magazines. Give your opinion with examples.

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311 words
7.0
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