It is an astonishing fact that multiple factors determine the behaviour of the child. Some people opine that, violence in the medias are the determinants of cruel character in children. But others opine that peer groups and parental infuances make a giant role in the character modification of children. I admit that, children have the great affinity to their parents and peer groups.
Admittedly, social medias are seductive and play a counterpart in the developmental stages. Children watches different kind of movies, shortfilms and other programmes. It may fickle their character. Moreover, war and other crimes are the most popular articles in the newspaper nowadays. In certain cases, children intrigue to follow the viewed item that propagates violence. However, it is not necessary that they follow all the unwanted news or quotes from the scene. Children' s are mastered enough to be practical.
On the other hand, peer groups and parental role s are greatly influencing children' s character. To substanciate, childrens are mostly attached to their parents and peers. They easily pick up the nature what they see actually. For example; child of a drunkard starts drinking in their early childhood.
Moreover, poverty, homelessness, lack of education all these factors contribute smaller proportion in violence. All these comes in environmental factores. Children do what, they see in their life. Most substantial fact is that children of good parents lead a life similar to their parents.
To sum up, no need to be perfectionist, instead live in a peaceful manner. New generations are the viewers of this trend. It help to develop a perfect society.
It is an astonishing fact that multiple factors determine the
behaviour
of the child.
Some
people
opine that, violence in the medias are the determinants of cruel
character
in
children
.
But
others opine that
peer
groups and parental
infuances
make
a giant role in the
character
modification of
children
. I admit that,
children
have the great affinity to their parents and
peer
groups.
Admittedly
, social medias are seductive and play a counterpart in the developmental stages.
Children
watches
different
kind of movies,
shortfilms
and
other
programmes
. It
may fickle
their
character
.
Moreover
, war and
other
crimes are the most popular articles in the newspaper nowadays. In certain cases,
children
intrigue to follow the viewed item that propagates violence.
However
, it is not necessary that they follow all the unwanted news or quotes from the scene.
Children&
#039; s
are mastered
enough
to be practical.
On the
other
hand,
peer
groups and parental role s are
greatly
influencing
children&
#039; s
character
. To
substanciate
,
childrens
are
mostly
attached to their parents and
peers
. They
easily
pick up the nature what they
see
actually.
For example
; child of a drunkard
starts
drinking in their early childhood.
Moreover
, poverty, homelessness, lack of education all these factors contribute smaller proportion in violence. All these
comes
in environmental
factores
.
Children
do what, they
see
in their life. Most substantial fact is that
children
of
good
parents lead a life similar to their parents.
To sum up, no need to be perfectionist,
instead
live
in a peaceful manner
. New generations are the viewers of this trend. It
help
to develop a perfect society.
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20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes