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Some people believe that if we want to save our world we should change our life drastically. Do which extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that if we want to save our world we should change our life drastically. Do which extend RkkVY

These days the nature of our planet is getting harmed by the majority of people. It is suggested that to deal with this problem, the lifestyle of humans should not change intensely. However, I believe that considerable change in our lifestyles cannot be as effective as gradual changes. Nowadays, people are manufacturing products or taking actions that can damage the environment. Such as plastic dishes can take a long-term to demolish. To deal with this problem, people certainly should change their style of living, but not drastically. It can take time and hard work to accomplish it, as people are not ready to turn inside out their whole life and start living in an eco-saving style. They got used to living in all the luxurious facilities they may not have because we will have to go to the gym, eat only healthy food. Moreover, such rapid actions can be disadvantageous for the economy of the country. After such action, most of the industries will be unable to carry on their productions, and It can lead to an increase in the unemployment rate. On the other hand, with step-by-step development, people can dodge such a problem. Furthermore, today's world is not developed enough and does not have enough facilities to accomplish such action. To do that humanity needs to have a certain amount of funds, equipment, and job positions, to provide the citizens with virtually the same facilities, they are used to have now.

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people
. It is suggested
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change
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change
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changes
.

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people
 are manufacturing products or taking actions that can damage the environment. Such as plastic dishes can take a long-term to demolish. To deal with this problem, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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change
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but
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. It can take time and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work to accomplish it, as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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start
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eco-saving
 style. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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used
 to living in all the luxurious facilities they may not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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only
 healthy food.

Moreover
, such rapid actions can be disadvantageous for the economy of the country. After such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactionlifeforcedealprocessplan
action
, most of the industries will be unable to carry on their productions, and It can lead to an increase in the unemployment rate. On the other hand
, with step-by-step development, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can dodge such a problem.

Furthermore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's world is not developed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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enough
 facilities to accomplish such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactionlifeforcedealprocessplan
action
. To do that humanity needs to have a certain amount of funds, equipment, and job positions, to provide the citizens with virtually
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used to have
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now
. 